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Chapter 6 - Ties That Bind (pages 17 Pencils) (Patreon)

Published:
2023-01-13 21:33:02
Imported:
2026-06

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Here we gooooo. Pencils of the lewdest page yet. 

I ended up reworking the bottom panel a bunch? Trying to really force that 'ass in the air' angle to make it all fit. Adding in a squished and squashed Judy was fun too; But I worry a bit about the perspective and sizing seeming off. I'll see how it goes as I start to ink it all. 

I'm still unsure about Nick's face in the first panel, it's supposed dot be a held breath - a bracing moment. Let me know how it's all hitting for you!

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Foxpal

I'm super excited to see this completed! Absolutely preem work as usual. Have a wonderful week!

Tigerchris

@.@ so much too look at

Mouse

The held breath expression feels right (as I sit here mimicking the action)

Amadose

haha rigggght? Love that line

Amadose

I flip flop each day on the eyes being upside down U's or regular U's. Glad this is working for you Mouse!

Mouse

Was intending to try and say more but... Hit enter too soon. But it seems "right" with both ways since it's a conflicted moment of reflection and preparation. Not sure which is more "foolproof" in conveying that though. It might be a 'six of one, half-dozen of the other' situation.

Diego P

I love how slow the pace of this page is, almost a heartbeat per panel XD I like Nick gathering strength in the first panel maybe showing him letting out a big breath might make the intention clearer. Gah that ass looks delicious lol

Jack Talon

This is just so fucking good

Amadose

That's what I had intended!!! But like... how to draw a deep breath: I've no idea?! haha. I might put the words 'inhale' and 'exhale' next to his head?! yessssss So glad it looks delicious <3

Amadose

Yeah this, for sure. When things aren't so clear cut I really struggle with indecisiveness! Lots of 'Just go with your gut and learn from lessons', even if it's very counter to the perfectionistic parts of my brain. Thanks for the help Mouse!

Diego P

"Deep sigh"?

Amadose

Yeah! I wonder what others do for it. I always think it's better to show-don't-tell. So if there's a way to make it seem more... in-panel that'll be better. Regardless what's important is that we just have a Nick face and the moment land. How it's read isn't toooo important, as long as we feel the heart-beat-pause.

Meggo

OBSESSED with all the teeth in this page. Woof. Plus our boy, Owen, just.. THRIVING between all the attention. Plus the atta boy? I’m gonna COMBUST, right here, right now.

Diego P

Oh, you can feel that already!

KinotheFox

What I wouldn't give to be in Owen's position right about now.

Heart Land

I think you could play with the bottom panel a bit, maybe even push judy out of frame for now? So the focus is only on our two foxes, but maybe you can only see Judy's feet sticking up and out, maybe trembling or twitching. It's a great saucy page though!! I love a good cuck that knows his place :3

Rickochet

YoooooooooooOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!! I love that butt up pose, it's coming out so well! Nicks going in HOT. You always put so much detail into the close ups and it's appreciated.

Danielfox

The diagonal action is so satisfying. I’m really digging this composition, there’s a lot you fit in, but it works. In fact, I almost feel it puts the viewer in that up close claustrophobic heaven, what it’s like being in that position. From personal experience, I think it’s right on the money. I can see the face, but not exactly how you meant it until I read what you wanted it to do. But once I read it clicked and I was like, oh yeah! Maybe even the smallest hint of written breath would make it clear? And maybe it just needs the ink haha. Either way I love it! Also let’s not forget, intrusive masculine tush pushed high in the air, sexy teeth on Nick as he goes in for that generous lick, his grasp on Owen’s right buttock, squished Judy, “atta boy” (I’m melting), and I really enjoy Owen’s face. I would’ve expected something more deviously victorious, but I like that there’s almost a romance in his expression. (I tend to read into things), but I feel like this is a very big moment for Owen. Yeah, he’s officially broken in Nick, but he accomplished it by doing it the right way this time, and it just has the feel of happy mutual bonding, and that’s really nice to see. Don’t get me wrong.. I wouldn’t mind a more conniving expression in that first panel of page 18, hehe. Anywho, SO PUMPED for the next edits the next two pages.

DasWollvieh

Can I swap the position with nick?

Amadose

hahaha 'combust' Ha I was a little worried it was TOO toothy! Thank you Meghan - giving me confidence <3

Amadose

Oh? judy's face a little too distracting? I could move more of her face under his shoulder! That might be a good shot!

Amadose

Ha - it's not hard for me - I'm such a sucker for a closeup. Especially in porn? Slow-closeups are just fire-works to me. Thanks bud!

Amadose

Oh gosh, I love all of that Daniel! I'll see about adding in a breath. or changing up Nick's mouth a little to show inhale/exhales. It's like... 90% there... but still not perfect for what I'd intended.

Amadose

Ha, maybe another day - today that ass is just for one particular cuck. =D

Spooky space cook

The supreme self control of not becoming the train conductor.

Bufff

Want u to draw judy hopps nibbling biting (gently) the cock of owen

Kyden

I prefer the current dynamic. Nick likes to be cucked and shouldn't be on top of Owen. Though Owen on Nick would be appropriate as Owen would be claiming both!