Hospital Background... and HELP (Spanish). (Patreon)

Progress in color and backgrounds are comming. Thanks to all of you! I hope you like them!I´m still writing what happens if you reject to fuck with Didac after second date with Neus... 

I have a friend who kindly makes me the favor to read all what I write before uploading it, since I have no one else who tells me their opinion about the story itslef... sometimes writing something without another opinion is a little bit frustrating... To know if it´s well written, if it makes sense if it entertain, if it´s lame... So far I´m super happy to know you´re enjoying the story, that makes me more happy than you can even imagine... 

But I would like to know some more opinions about the new part that is comming before the next update (Thursday 14 of September).

I hope before the end of the month, there will be an english version for all that part... as correct as possible. ^^

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HELP

Problem the Help I´m asking: It´s in SPANISH. (It´s my language, and before translating it, I write everything in Spanish... so it would be necessary for you to know Spanish.

In this revision I would really appreciate if you can tell me if there are major problems with coherence with the story, if it´s entertaining, if you miss something or if something is really bad written.

As reward I will give you the next PREMIUM version... I know it´s not a lot... So that´s why I´ m asking help... After all I appreciate any opinion you can provide me.

Thanks for your support!