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Top left was my first attempt.

Top right was my second attemp.

Bottom left was done by Rianna as a comission.

Bottom right is my final retouchment.

I decided to add more muscular tone, since at the end he/she has more muscular tone and is still the first step on his transformation to become a woman, I also increased his pectoral and changed the ground.

I also must admit that in the first attemp was one of my first drawings in years, since before this project all I was doing so far was in 3D, I hope to get improving on my art skills... 

What do you think about it? ^^

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jonnymelabo

I agree on shower floor is looking weird... I´m not good on doing backgrounds or grounds... I guess I will ask to the artist who will do the background to see if he can do a better job than me for the water. ^^ On about muscles, is a bit complicated issue, since in theory is the first step on transformation, so it has to have a bit male muscle complexity while at same time starting to have the first steps to not be so male... Probably I overdid it... I accept that... xD Thanks for your comment! ;)

BLADErayW

I can see the improvements. The only thing that gets me is the bottom right the water has to much reflection of color. It looks more like tanning oil coming off then what it is supposed to be.

Varik

I think the reflections in the water on the final are way to overdone, the water looks much better in the stage 3 pick. Also the eyes look real off to me in the final, I think the irises need to be better defined, more visible. Right now it just looks like he has glowing white eyes.

jonnymelabo

I agree, I did my best to try something different on what I´m used without using reference and that wasa the result... xD I will ask my background artist to try to do it better than me, I hope he can success with that xD Thanks for your comment! ;)

jonnymelabo

Yep, reflections in the water are way to overdone, I hope my background artist can improve where I failed... xD Well eyes look different there because in fact those eyes are different, they are looking at right direction, but image is so tiny that probably you didn´t saw it with enough quality... ^^ (Once you play it, with more zoom, then you will tell me again if they look weird or not... probably is that xD). Thanks for your comment!