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Game I was doing before: A Vampire in Barcelona (Patreon)

Published:
2016-11-08 09:21:17
Edited:
2018-06-29 11:02:40
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Before create "Pact with a Witch", The first game I was developing with Ren´py was this one:  A vampire in Barcelona. 

It was a game inspired on role-play-game: Vampire, the masquerade.

Plot: You wake up buried underground on the mountain of Tibidabo (Barcelona), The first thing you see is the full moon, the second the lights of a car just before it crush on you. After that you are so hungry that you attempt to kill the girl who trampled you before a huge motorist-look-like guy knock you out.You wake up again in some kind of palace (Palau de la Música) where a kid named "King of the damned city" gives you 2 choices, die at the dawn or follow his orders. 

The most normal thing would be he killed you, since you are just a newborn without a creator, but his "Witch" saw in you a great potential... 

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At the end I saw  it was too ambitious, I wanted add too many characters, a lot of combats, multiple game types, places, races, powers...I wouldn´t ended it being my first game... So I decided to try a different and more simple game... and then is where appeared "Pact with a Witch".And that´s all... I just wanted to share this with you... ^^

What do you think? Is the plot interesting or too simple? 

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Endirazu

I've never played your first game, but the summary makes it seem a little confused. In my opinion, a few twists are good but too many create too much "restlessness". I like the story of Pact with a Witch so far and I am very curious how the story will progress. Keep up your good work!

Itsola

I like both stories, but prefer the Pact with a Witch for the TF, or there is also on the Vampire in Barcelona?

jonnymelabo

No... I didn´t upload that project since I did only the introduction... I appreciate you like pact with a witch ^^

jonnymelabo

There´s no upload of that game, so nobody played that apart from few people I sent it directly. I´m agree, frew twists are good but too many create too much "restlessness" Now I´m watching Naruto Shippuden on 420 chapter... and there can´t be more Twists... But even thought... in my opinion it´s not a big deal the quantity of twists... otherwise, how you expose them and how "coherent" are... Take in mind "Pact with a Witch" is a supernatural story after all... so don´t expect a completely realistic ending ^^ Thanks for your comment!

Leonardo Prado

"At the end I saw it was too ambitious" - Every first game ever LOL. But in a simpler setting, it can be a nice story :)

jonnymelabo

Indeed I only did the introduction of this game... so it was really preliminary project... but yeah... usually is a bad idea being too ambitious on your first or second project, specially if you´re alone... ^^

Snow

Tuve la oportunidad de ver el anterior proyecto de vampiros... parecía un buen proyecto. Pero "Pacto con una bruja" tiene muy buena pinta y la dedicación a ello vale la pena apoyarlo. Animo!

Tsu

You could always go back to it later when this game is over