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Majo

So that’s it

Dragneel7557

Well, I’m officially terrified of this chapter now

McTeeg

The sane but upgraded

Edranair

Oooohhh... Ooooohhhh nooooooo..... Well, she had to come back sometime and no doubt it's about to lead to some very uncomfortable conversations for our leading ladies

Joe Markese

... ok.. apon futher thought.. there is no way..or very unlikely.. visually the two are a match.. Eyes are diffent size and shape. If the machine changes the eyes, then the pattern of vains changed as well.. as would the markers in and around the eyes the shape of the face is shorter on the female.. they would need Dna.. do they have DNA? Am i willing to accept the scan is the Mcguffin needed to move the story forward? Yes.. yes I am.. do i want to know how the scan works? Yes.. yes I do.. long time sci fi fan.. dose this changes the story no.. noo it dose not.

Joe Markese

Ok.. I got my nerd out.. ill be quite now.

pinkhorizons

I'm more focused on fiction first and science later. But, for those who want a more scientific explanation, you could imagine that the machine/AI is able to read patterns not visible by the human eye. As the previous page has shown, Rosalie had her data collected in many different angles by a video recording. Perhaps that even allowed for X-rays. But really, as a writer, I'm focused on narrative first and worldbuilding second. I'll leave it for people to create theories on how things work.

Joe Markese

Completely fine! Its an observation made on the data we where given on a page.. and tottaly a ran over reaction. Don't take it to heart as a writing critique. I'm am enjoying the story and I keep coming back for each chapter. Thank you for your effort and hard work!