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Opinions on IHHAT Vol. 1 (Patreon)

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2016-10-11 14:58:16
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Any critiques of Volume 1 so far? Yes, I'm aware that the story may be a bit lengthy compared to most fetish comics, I mostly like context rather than "Hey, Skinny girl! You're in love so go get fat now!" and then "BOOM! You're bigger than the Earth so go eat the moon!"

Hopefully the story at least has people's interest thus far. There is only 6 Chapters in Volume 1 and Chapter 4 will be ending in a few weeks. Other Volumes won't be as long though it'll mostly depend on the stories that are told, but I'll mostly aim for 3 chapters each.

Anyway, I know how normal fetish comics are usually paced and perhaps future stories will be shorter to about 1 chapter if it's just a "Here's some fun eye candy!" when it's called for. When voting for future stories happens, I'll try to detail how long each story will be estimated to be and most likely be clear on if stories will be just eye candy with little context.

But yes, feel free to give your opinions and critiques. I mean seriously feel free to lay it on me. Call my stuff shit if you want to or suggest material that I should study from. I've only got like 25 years worth of comics/manga/web comics/smut/hentai and whatever I've been reading and still have up until this point so I try to be well rounded and open minded as much as I can. 

Often I put a lot of attention into characters if they're important enough so balancing that with the fetish is still new to me since IHHAT is the first fetish series I've ever done. I've drawn adult stuff before yes, but I haven't taken it further to what I'd like to see (yet) but IHHAT has been a big help pushing myself further into it. I feel that build up makes certain scenes more meaningful rather than "Hey bitch, get naked cause you love me!" or "Hey a sexy guy who's not good with girls, let's make him submissive and have sex with like 8 of them all at once!". Though I'm not against stories like that either >.> (puts that as eye candy).

Joking aside, I thank everyone for handling my pacing as is has been so far.

So if you've got something to say then speak up, I like reading comments, I read everything. Don't worry about feelings and such, got enough harsh talk from college teachers so I can take it ^w^

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SashaGelert

Mmk.. primarily, your comic ain't 'shit' by any standards :P Personally I love seeing the change into a longer story line as opposed to some other more common/frequent works by other artists (wont name names ;) ) where a 'full length story' is 10-30 pages of rapid focused growth/expansion/WG/BE with little plot to it. No complaints, i love a good fictional quickie, but it is a very nice change to see such a well written story being built here! Personally, not qualified to critique art or anything :P need to get off my lazy furry butt and do more writing myself to be honest

Anonymous

Greetings from France, I'll try to be understandable. I feel that Marci gains weight a little too quickly, then again, if you have a lot of chapters and a lot of other characters to develop, I think that's ok. I really enjoy the story so far, I feel that Marci's character is developping, she starts to understand her surroundings, and she adapts slowly. Not gonna lie, Skylar is, in my opinion, a gigantic creep, but I have high hopes that his character will start to develop stronger feelings for Marci. Can't wait to see more of your story :)

Viro
>>2750371

Thanks for the comment. Yeah Marci's weight gain is a little fast mostly to fit the fetish a bit but still have character development X3

Vulpix

I understand this latest chapter is mostly character and story progression, but all I can say is that I can't wait till we get back to the stuffing and WG. That being said I still do enjoy the story and look forward to the updates every week.

Viro
>>2750489

Thanks for the comment, yes there will be more stuffing/weight gain. Have to get through the needed details X3

Alex Kay

IHHAT is a fascinating, curious premise. I mean, you have six separate stories, all exploring different sexual deviances (some down right mature), with the potential for a semi-recurring, established cast. All with an evocative air of mystery that binds it all together with a foreboding undertone. It's hugely ambitious, which also serves to undermine it potential as people simply may not get it, expecting just a simple fetish comic. As much as I enjoy Marci's story, I'm sticking around to see what the rest of the IHHAT world has to offer in its murky depths.

Alex Kay

"I've drawn adult stuff before yes," Well shit, ain't that an understatement looool. If World Gates taught me anything - you horny AF, Viro XD

Sean Nolan

I'm really in love with this comic very much ^^ i think the added in character development add a lot to stories, fetish or not, and really appreciate the work you have put into the characters. im feeling more emotions then just going oh well looks like its time to jerk X3 i feel anger toward the fox cheerleader (who im really hoping gets double teamed by marcy and skylar and be force fed till she is fat XD) i can feel the struggle of skylar actually falling in love with marcy when he wasnt planning on it, ect. i love it all and cant wait for the next vols even though the rest (other then the crossdressing one) are things i try to stay away from yet here i am looking forward the blakes backstory the most X3 even better is i got a friend into this comic and she really isnt into weight gain. this comic is way more then a fetish story to me. its a real flat out story that ive fallen in love with and cant wait to see more of. thank you very much ^^

Viro
>>2751155

Which is why I want to make World Gates better >w>

Nova25

That comic is THE reason I subscribed to this Patreon. It's more than fine as it is now.

Jarcu

I don't mind slower pacing as long as it goes on for long enough for her to get to that massive point. Although I personally would like to see the weight be a bit more belly/breast focused than butt/hips, but I also understand that there are plenty of people who vehemently enjoy the current shape, however I figure if I'm a paying customer I at least deserve to be able to cast my vote as much as anyone else.

Chaotick9

I like learning about the characters you create. Whether it's in something with a long narrative or a short one I view it all as a way to learn more about a character. (unless it's declared noncanon of course then it's just fun :3)

Tanamox

It's really good as it is. I've enjoyed seeing them as more understandable characters with a complex world behind them. That's part of why I'm very eagerly looking forward to more chapters. But it's also that I'm used to reading rather more compressed stories in hentai and some western stuff - still kinda new to long-term comics like IHHAT, Dinner with Sister, and as much as I regret it, Hetty. As I said before, I like getting insights into character motivations - I just don't want IHHAT to fall into a boring, disappointing cycle of not much weight gain like Hetty has.