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P43. (Extra Notes, there should be no blood at any point during the Underworld scene. Hindo must be nude, his ass should be visible on one or more panels.)

(Goes back to the underworld at a view of Jackal as he attaches the end of the chain to a large metal rod sticking out of the ground. Extra Notes, there should be several metal hooks with chains attached to them on the large metal rod. Hindo must not be visible. The narration dialogue should be displayed on the first of the panels. The sound effect must be displayed on the panel that has the chain connecting to the metal hook.) Meanwhile... ''Narration'' ...Clank!.. ''Sound Effect'' Panels 1-2.

(Jackal with elegance, points to a pick-axe that is made by metal and bone. Extra Notes, The pick-axe must look like it is heated up.) ...Obtain this tool, and join the others... You will regret what will happen to you if you refuse... ''Jackal Speaks, while displaying a grim stare on his facial expression.'' Panel 3. 

..Your power's essence has been returned to its reservoir... Any attempt at defying us will be met with horror... And so you never forsaken these words... ''Jackal Speaks, while displaying a grim stare on his facial expression.'' Panel 4.

(Jackal conjures a magma whip and lashes Hindo in the face and chests with it, ripping off and severely burning his flesh. Extra Notes, these panels should have emphasized quality of art.) Panels 5-7.

(An extremely dramatic view of Hindo falling to his knees in severe pain. Extra Notes, these panels should have emphasized quality of art. There must be steam coming from his body. Hindo must be in shock.) .............Ahhhhhhh!!!.... ''Hindo Speaks, while displaying severe pain on his facial expression.'' Panels 8-9.

...Another lashing, for one who will not lift his tool immediately... ''Jackal Speaks, while displaying a grim stare on his facial expression.'' Panel 10.

(A dramatic view of Hindo looking over towards the pick-axe. He then crawls to it and picks it up, burning the flesh on his hands. Extra Notes, there must be steam coming from his hands. The following dialogue should display whenever Hindo is grabbing the pick-axe.) .....Ehhhhhhhhhhgggg..... Ahhhh!!... ''Hindo Speaks, while displaying severe pain and shock on his facial expression.'' Panels 11-13.

(Jackal with elegance, points to a magma vein obsidian hillside. Extra Notes, the dialogue should be displayed on the first of the two panels. There should be several fully burnt and hairless humanoids mining the hillside. The burned humanoids must be chained to the nearby large metal rod. There should be piles of mined obsidian chunks in the area.) Panels 14-15.

(Hindo approaches the hillside and is standing next to one of the burned humanoids. Extra Notes, the burned humanoid must be in complete shock. The burned humanoid must be swinging his pick-axe. The burned humanoid next to him is Underbite Troll and must have his teeth design.) Panels 16-17. 

(The burned humanoid looks over at Hindo.) Panel 18.

....So you died too? Man, that's a fickle bitch... Who killed you dude? Did Troll King finally get like, tired of you or some fucking shit?... About time.. ''Burned Underbite Troll Speaks, while displaying complete shock on his facial expression.'' Panel 19.

...You.... You know me?.... ''Hindo Speaks, while displaying severe pain and shock on his facial expression.'' Panel 20. 

...No shit, dumbshit.. You're that boring electric guy... When i was alive, i lived in the totally sick Troll City... It was super killer, but then some douche bag cut my fucking head off... ''Burned Underbite Troll Speaks, while displaying complete shock on his facial expression.'' Panel 21.

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