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Embergram did the scripting for the milidox VS Coyote conclusion.  It  was actually chapter 24 and on is when things kind of shifted more  towards him doing whatever he wanted, he started shifting the dialog and  plot and things like that more to his liking whether it conflicted with  what I came up with or not. The scene with Sylvester and Coyote talking  at the beginning of chapter 24 I originally wrote and gave it to him  for scripting and he actually cut out more dialog than he normally did  and changed a good bit of the dialog to what he wanted, only a bit of it  remained as I wrote it but at the time I was letting him have Tgt. he  changed the dialog to more of what he wanted and he was becoming less  cooperative. Though we still made a team effort with the story and  scripting during the time. My say just got devalued by him due to his  personal shit with me. But during chapter 24 and the majority of 25  before he left I basically had to send my writings to him for scripting  and he basically thought it was OK to do with the plots I wrote as he  pleased but he no longer felt the need to check in with me if the story  he was coming up with was cool with me. You know, how he thought he was  the Supreme overlord of the comic.  Skipping Hindo's fight with Rob the  way it skipped ahead was his idea. I actually thought it wouldn't be a  super good idea but he went with that to get past the attack faster  which is why robs fight and the blaze stuff was the way it was. I just  went with it at the time and made it work. Chapter 24 was still how me  and him planned for the most part. The Eggman, Elmer flashbacks I didn't  really have much involvement in. Mostly he told me the concept and I  was like, "sounds good" and then he wrote it the way he wanted. Yes we  originally planned for Elmer to get overloaded with Eggman's memories  but he added a lot of stuff I didn't know about prior.Like the stuff with Blaze's sister was completely new content to me. I  heard only a brief mention of the idea prior to it. Of course Coyote's  wrath, and Eggman's son I wrote with him. But it was chapter 25 that had  a lot of surprises and unexpected changes to it. The page with vegeta  and trunks was an old draft page I did during Coyote and Demaro's fight  but he changed the dialog to that completely.  The gators and bad driver  stuff was all him. Also the Saralite scene as well. Though the Saralite  scene turned out great so I don't mind.I love the inclusion of her of  course. I came back during that time and he included the Arthur scene we  had planned in the future and put it there because we had no particular  spot to place the scene.  I'm pretty sure he did the whole "The old  narrator being a drunken loser thing" was an inside jab at me when I  came back.  saying I was the old Tgt creator who's a loser. The stuff  with the potion connects to future plot we had planned but the magical  school bus inclusion was him. The Coyote and Satan stuff was more me  than him but he helped.Another scene I had a little assistance with was the sinu part, I  designed the characters but I didn't actually do any writing for that  scene. More so just assisted with drawing a tad and also his idea to put  the scene there instead of a later chapter was his idea The stuff with  Coyote and the piss rain I also had little part in. I was shown the  script and found it humorous.  That was a quick add in He came up with.  The troll news stuff was all him and the cereal stuff. That McDonald's  joke was a Crack towards me cuz I was working at McDonald's at the time  that he wrote that sceneHulk killing that one Troll with a rock was all him as well. The hell  stuff I jumped in with him on but it actually messed with the original  content I had with Underbite and the scene was a surprise to me. I just  being the person I am, just kind of went with it and made it work by  writing Underbite's interaction with hindo and the hell guy. and  adjusting my Underbite plot to fit his changes he didn't tell me about  until the page was posted. Underbite originally was suppose to have been  replaced by a robot and not dead. He kept the bulk of the conversation  with underbit in hell we wrote but cut out quite a bit of it. Yeah I was  quite frustrated with all of that at the time. There Nem stuff I had no  part in either and i was utterly confused as to how Nem was able to  catch the angel.  The Troll fortress content of that chapter was what we  originally plannen. The debriefing was his attempt to clear up the  confusion on what happened off screen but I also had no part in writing.Me and embergram wrote the Tails snd Vivian scene and surprisingly the  majority of that he kept. But he did remove some of the dialog. The  Satan stuff at the end of the chapter was what we were the most excited  to do way ahead of time. But all me and him had planned was Tom fucking  up the trolls and dying, the hogwart stuff and Tom stuff me and Shims  wrote. Hogward was just going to be another Troll with no purpose other  then dying. It was me and Shims that developed the last scene. Also Tom  screwing petunia he added without seeing what I thought about it and it  caught me by surprise.Because originally we had it planned that Tom would try talking to her  and he would be the reason she was on the battlefield and died though I  didn't mind the content. but the affair was his idea and then me and  shims added the philosophical stuff with Tom facing his demons at the  end to make it fit better and tie into his redemption. I honestly don't  think embergram was going to do more with that part other than the scene  with Tom Knocking on the door.With the chapter being done I'm happy with how this chapter ended up but  if you was also wondering why the scenes with this chapter was a bit  all over the place that is the reason why. Internal writing struggles we  had until embergram's departure.Hope this is helpful informationDamn auto correct fucked up some of my words

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