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Embergram did the scripting for the milidox VS Coyote conclusion. It was actually chapter 24 and on is when things kind of shifted more towards him doing whatever he wanted, he started shifting the dialog and plot and things like that more to his liking whether it conflicted with what I came up with or not. The scene with Sylvester and Coyote talking at the beginning of chapter 24 I originally wrote and gave it to him for scripting and he actually cut out more dialog than he normally did and changed a good bit of the dialog to what he wanted, only a bit of it remained as I wrote it but at the time I was letting him have Tgt. he changed the dialog to more of what he wanted and he was becoming less cooperative. Though we still made a team effort with the story and scripting during the time. My say just got devalued by him due to his personal shit with me. But during chapter 24 and the majority of 25 before he left I basically had to send my writings to him for scripting and he basically thought it was OK to do with the plots I wrote as he pleased but he no longer felt the need to check in with me if the story he was coming up with was cool with me. You know, how he thought he was the Supreme overlord of the comic. Skipping Hindo's fight with Rob the way it skipped ahead was his idea. I actually thought it wouldn't be a super good idea but he went with that to get past the attack faster which is why robs fight and the blaze stuff was the way it was. I just went with it at the time and made it work. Chapter 24 was still how me and him planned for the most part. The Eggman, Elmer flashbacks I didn't really have much involvement in. Mostly he told me the concept and I was like, "sounds good" and then he wrote it the way he wanted. Yes we originally planned for Elmer to get overloaded with Eggman's memories but he added a lot of stuff I didn't know about prior.Like the stuff with Blaze's sister was completely new content to me. I heard only a brief mention of the idea prior to it. Of course Coyote's wrath, and Eggman's son I wrote with him. But it was chapter 25 that had a lot of surprises and unexpected changes to it. The page with vegeta and trunks was an old draft page I did during Coyote and Demaro's fight but he changed the dialog to that completely. The gators and bad driver stuff was all him. Also the Saralite scene as well. Though the Saralite scene turned out great so I don't mind.I love the inclusion of her of course. I came back during that time and he included the Arthur scene we had planned in the future and put it there because we had no particular spot to place the scene. I'm pretty sure he did the whole "The old narrator being a drunken loser thing" was an inside jab at me when I came back. saying I was the old Tgt creator who's a loser. The stuff with the potion connects to future plot we had planned but the magical school bus inclusion was him. The Coyote and Satan stuff was more me than him but he helped.Another scene I had a little assistance with was the sinu part, I designed the characters but I didn't actually do any writing for that scene. More so just assisted with drawing a tad and also his idea to put the scene there instead of a later chapter was his idea The stuff with Coyote and the piss rain I also had little part in. I was shown the script and found it humorous. That was a quick add in He came up with. The troll news stuff was all him and the cereal stuff. That McDonald's joke was a Crack towards me cuz I was working at McDonald's at the time that he wrote that sceneHulk killing that one Troll with a rock was all him as well. The hell stuff I jumped in with him on but it actually messed with the original content I had with Underbite and the scene was a surprise to me. I just being the person I am, just kind of went with it and made it work by writing Underbite's interaction with hindo and the hell guy. and adjusting my Underbite plot to fit his changes he didn't tell me about until the page was posted. Underbite originally was suppose to have been replaced by a robot and not dead. He kept the bulk of the conversation with underbit in hell we wrote but cut out quite a bit of it. Yeah I was quite frustrated with all of that at the time. There Nem stuff I had no part in either and i was utterly confused as to how Nem was able to catch the angel. The Troll fortress content of that chapter was what we originally plannen. The debriefing was his attempt to clear up the confusion on what happened off screen but I also had no part in writing.Me and embergram wrote the Tails snd Vivian scene and surprisingly the majority of that he kept. But he did remove some of the dialog. The Satan stuff at the end of the chapter was what we were the most excited to do way ahead of time. But all me and him had planned was Tom fucking up the trolls and dying, the hogwart stuff and Tom stuff me and Shims wrote. Hogward was just going to be another Troll with no purpose other then dying. It was me and Shims that developed the last scene. Also Tom screwing petunia he added without seeing what I thought about it and it caught me by surprise.Because originally we had it planned that Tom would try talking to her and he would be the reason she was on the battlefield and died though I didn't mind the content. but the affair was his idea and then me and shims added the philosophical stuff with Tom facing his demons at the end to make it fit better and tie into his redemption. I honestly don't think embergram was going to do more with that part other than the scene with Tom Knocking on the door.With the chapter being done I'm happy with how this chapter ended up but if you was also wondering why the scenes with this chapter was a bit all over the place that is the reason why. Internal writing struggles we had until embergram's departure.Hope this is helpful informationDamn auto correct fucked up some of my words