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DeweRT01

Sweet! The shopping scene

Joshua B

At main panel 20 where they are talking about the mall in the speech bubble starting with "Not even once" in bold there a missing word in the last sentence. "I'm not even you could call it a town." 'sure' should be in that sentence. "I'm not even sure you could call it a town." As always thanks for the chapter!