Edge boi RETURNS - First sketch vs refined in PS (Patreon)

BOY DID I MISS THIS EDGELORD
But MAN do I wish I could draw him hAPPY

Here is a comparison from my original taditionally lined sketch to the refined and corrected version in Photoshop! Drawing on paper first still is a huge time safer for me to get the base poses done and then build on it in Photoshop.