Feedback Request: Talon Penny Lustful Part I (Patreon)

So the latest Talon comic, actually a Penny Lustful or PL instead of a Talon X story, has been out for a wee bit. Long enough for you to devour and digest it, we hope!

So what do you think? Got some feedback? What are your thoughts on the style, the story - was there a story?? - the artwork, the focus for the PoV for each pic or panel. Word choices, sound styles, whatever.

But as this is DireLilith writing and requesting this, on Darthhell's behalf (he does want the feedback, I'm just the one writing this!), please be gentle and considerate. Yeah I know, clearly the guy's a toughie but he's still an artist. Please don't be too critical. I personally would love to hear what turned you on the most about this story/comic. What made you get hot and hard, what left you wanting more, what seemed incomplete, what could have been a close up and what was wayyyyy too close - ??

Let us know please! We're here for you, but this type of feedback is a gift you can give back. Think of this as an excuse to go back and read it again, right? <3 <3 <3