Faith, Draft 1, 1_5, outline, CH 22 (Patreon)

Thomas wakes up in the hospital, unable, or unwilling to explain what happened to him.

This is the last of the ‘setup chapters’ for lack of a better term. 22 chapter before the “story” starts might be a problem.

On the writing front itself, the changes Ben made are minor, mainly diminishing the impact of some scenes while increasing other. Interesting decisions were made.

So that’s it on the comments, I hope you enjoy the file