Faith, Draft 1, 1_5, outline, CH 27 (Patreon)

Getting dinner gets a little interesting

Mostly fine tuning on Ben’s part, with the biggest change being the removal of some religious talk in relation to families. The talk was neutral, and there mainly because while I’m not religious, when it came time to address ‘everyone has a family’ the immaculate birth is what popped in my head. Ben replaced it with kids being raised in the wild and having packs. Which works better.

So that’s it on the comments, I hope you enjoy the file