Faith, Draft 1, 1_5, outline, CH 29 (Patreon)

Where Thomas gets a little background on his situation

There was a story meeting this weekend (as there are all weekends) and I one thing I am hoping to keep, which ben had change (the fact the Madoc believe he and Thomas are brothers) will probably not survive, and not because of Ben won’t let me, once I explain my reasoning he was okay with it, but because there’s a scene with Thomas’s grandfather and Madoc coming up, and the moment Madoc mentions Thomas and him being brother, the grandfather will shot that down in such a way it would destroy the new memories Henry gave Madoc and ‘break’ the story.

In the chapter itself the only thing worth mentioning is the fact Ben forgot Grant’s truck doesn’t have a slot for his phone in it.

So that’s it on the comments, I hope you enjoy the file