Faith, Draft 1, 1_5, outline, CH 36 (Patreon)

Thomas learns a little of what it’s like to live on the street, and when he things he might be able to make that work, people show up.

Hardest part of this chapter was the homelessness. I’m not writing a treatise on it, so I had no interest in going in depth about it, but I also didn’t want to romanticize it. Half a paragraph to do both isn’t a lot to work with. I have no idea if it worked.

As for change, only minor stuff cause by the two writers not actually talking to each other between version. I don’t mind it, but it show where we think differently. In this case, I had Thomas use when he experience with the Brislow and go in a different direction for his explanation, while Ben had him use it to refine his explanation.

So that’s it on the comments, I hope you enjoy the file