Faith, Draft 1, 1_5, outline, CH 43 (Patreon)
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Faith in the Family, Commentary, CH 43
The group has to deal with 2 infants, and there is plot advancement in the middle of it.
Ben made substantial changes to this chapter. All based around what he knows about the story and what I don’t know/forgot. We’re also realizing that some characters haven’t had ‘character hooks’ set up, so pulling twists/jokes basd on them isn’t working.
So that’s it on the comments, I hope you enjoy the file