No livewriting tonight... (Patreon)

I caught either some severe indigestion or mild food poisoning, so I'm not feeling up to much original writing tonight. Instead I'm going to work on getting the next chapter of CSP ready for posting.

With that in mind, I ask you go back to the previous post and read last night's writing. Is this worth going on with, or is it too much of a yawner? Alternately, would a better introduction help?

https://www.patreon.com/posts/23254444