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Love sees past some extra boob squish.

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coredumperror

That first panel is kindof of a big leap from the previous page, where all Penelope said was "It's me". I think expanding the line on that page to something like, "It's mere... Peter." would improve it a lot. I also think MJ's font is still a bit too hard to read. Being all fancy is fine, but it must not come at the expense of legibility. This is why fonts like Comic Sans exist: they're super legible even at small sizes.