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Jake jumped backwards, making use of the space opening up to create some distance between himself and whatever would appear in the Labyrinth Master’s stead. Casper also started preparations of his own, taking advantage of the visual spectacle from the phase transition.

Stopping and starting to charge his Arcane Powershot, Jake also began to make modifications to the Protean Arrow he’d created within his quiver. It was originally designed for the flesh and blood dungeon boss, but based on current developments, that wasn’t what they were gonna face in the last phase.

He kept watching as the blue lightning bolt lit up the area, funneling energy into the corpse of the Labyrinth Master. Simultaneously, the many tiles on the ground also activated once more, the energy they had absorbed earlier streaming towards the boss to empower it further.

The body of the Labyrinth Master slowly began to rise into the air, bathed in insane levels of energy that shot down from seemingly nowhere. By now, all the flesh had been stripped from the cyborg’s body, leaving a borderline skeletal robot. As energy descended, Jake noticed that where the heart should be, there was instead a core of some kind that had begun glowing brightly. As both the C-grades were wondering what Minaga had cooked up for them, the voice echoed once more.

“Damage to vessel: Critical. Repairing essentials. Upgrading. Charging Core. All features unlocked.”

Right on cue, the body started repairing itself, replacing many of the places where flesh had been before with even more metal as the Labyrinth Master went from cyborg to robot, or perhaps more accurately, golem. The glowing core’s light was eventually hidden by metal covering the entire chest of the boss. Slowly, the lightning bolt subsided, fully revealing the golem.

The golem’s arm moved robotically as it reached out to the side, the gunlance below flying up into its hand, crackling with electricity.

[Aginian Crisis Protocol Golem  – lvl ???]

Without any further warning, the entire golem’s body erupted with a thunderous sound, releasing a shockwave of electricity in the process.

Jake responded as he loosed his Arcane Powershot, an explosion of arcane energy sending his arrow shooting forward. At the same time, Casper, who was still in melee, was pushed back by the shockwave released by the newly awakened Aginian Crisis Protocol Golem, but not without activating the trap he’d laid.

To Jake’s surprise, the sphere of magical seals from Seal of Enervation appeared once more, the Risen having seemingly reactivated the curse despite the Labyrinth Master having died. Unfortunately, Jake’s poison was all gone, and his Aginiansbane was effectively useless as it was made to destroy members of the Aginian race and not their mechanical creations.

Right on time, too, as Jake’s Arcane Powershot impacted the golem right in the chest. The boss was sent flying back from the impact, but Jake could only frown as he realized that his attack hadn’t even left a mark on its body. Instead, he’d struck a small barrier right above its exterior that absorbed the entire attack.

It reminded him way too much of the Altmar Census Golem he’d fought way back then, so that wasn’t good news. Fortunately, it looked like Casper’s curse had still worked despite the barrier, and hopefully, it would even make it faster to breach through said barrier.

Jake and Casper quickly exchanged a glance, sharing the sentiment that this third phase was likely going to be annoying. However, neither felt any particular fear as they both got to work. Nocking another arrow, Jake started attacking as Casper enveloped himself in curse energy and sent a wave of cursed stakes toward the golem, which had stabilized itself after being pushed back by Jake’s opening attack.

Raising the gunlance, it fired, shooting out a beam of lightning toward the Risen. Casper quickly moved to dodge, but he was a bit too slow and was struck on his left side. His ethereal body was sheared off, and immediately, Jake knew that the Risen had actually taken quite a bit of damage.

A rain of arcane arrows struck the golem before it could shoot again, all of them exploding as the air was filled with destructive arcane energy. The passive barrier naturally blocked everything, but Jake confirmed that the golem consumed energy to do it, even with a weak attack like this.

With this realization, Jake kept shooting arrows that split into multiple, seeking only to fill the entire arena with destructive energy. Not only did this consume the energy of the golem, but it even helped Casper not be attacked, as he could use the arcane energy to avoid the detection of the B-grade.

The Risen retreated, wanting to avoid the lightning as he placed down traps in his wake. It didn’t take the golem long to pursue, having seemingly designated Casper as its primary target as it chased out of the destructive energies, straight toward him.

It passed through several newly laid traps, getting itself wrapped in black chains that barely slowed it down as they swiftly broke. During its charge, the gunlance it had been holding transformed, morphing into a long and thick sword instead of the semi-ranged weapon.

Swinging the sword, a crescent wave of lightning energy erupted forward, sizzling across the tiled ground as it closed in on the Risen. Casper summoned a cloud of ghostly energy to defend himself, but the lightning quickly tore through it. The Risen had the electricity wash over him, groaning in pain as he definitely took some serious damage once more.

That’s when Jake remembered something that he really should have considered earlier... ghosts were weak to lightning. It was their natural weakness, and despite Lyra being a Blightwraith, she was still a variety of ghost and couldn’t escape this natural affinity weakness.

With Casper being in their merged form, he was also at least half a ghost, meaning he shared this weakness. Perhaps that was why the Risen quickly used his movement skill to propel himself backwards as he made himself fully corporeal once more, retracting the ghostly energies floating around him into his body.

Jake helped as much as he could by bombarding the golem with arrows, but the barrier made it hard to do much. The B-grade didn’t even try to dodge as it merely tanked everything with the singular goal of killing Casper.

It swung its lightning-wrapped blade several more times, sending out crescent waves of lightning that Casper tried desperately to avoid. At the same time, it continued to close in, and no matter what Jake and Casper threw at the damn thing, it didn’t seem to give a damn.

Soon, it caught up with the Risen and started swinging rapidly. Casper tried to dodge and block, but the golem was faster and stronger than the Labyrinth Master had been. He did what he could, but Casper was continually pushed back and took damage, even when he fully blocked attacks, as explosions of electricity erupted with every blow.

He tried to run and get away several times, but the golem wouldn’t let him. Watching this, and seeing how utterly useless his arrows had been, Jake knew he had to do something else. Putting away his bow, he didn’t hesitate to use One Step and flap his wings as he propelled himself down toward the two figures fighting below.

Casper was durable, yes, but he was entering dangerous territory as Jake approached. He had been slashed several times, his body full of injuries, and his resources were being drained rapidly.

At full speed, Jake arrived. He slammed straight into the side of the golem’s body, landing two Piercing Fangs at once as he encountered the annoying barrier. Fortunately, the impact was enough to send the golem sliding back, allowing Casper to desperately use his movement skill and even chug down a potion to help his resource situation a little.

The golem regarded Jake for a moment, only to promptly activate the same movement skill shown by the Labyrinth Master before. Its body shimmered and warped as it went straight around Jake, going for Casper again.

Reacting quickly, Jake chased after and used One Step to get ahead. The golem still tried to get around Jake, but he read its movements and kicked right where it went. He hit the side of the golem, deactivating its movement skill and knocking it slightly to the side, but needless to say, a kick didn’t do much in the damage department.

“We just need to buy time!” Casper yelled from behind as he tried to place more traps while running to avoid being caught.

“I know!” Jake yelled back while charging toward the B-grade again.

As Casper had said, time was on their side as long as they could avoid the golem’s relentless attacks. The B-grade was burning through its energy rapidly, and it didn’t seem to have any ability to recover. The shining core was overcharged to the extreme, but it didn’t matter as the golem was never meant to “survive” this encounter.

From the beginning, it was just the reanimated body of the Labyrinth Master. A solution created by whatever was behind that female voice to kill whoever had managed to take down the Labyrinth Master.

All that attacking the golem did was reduce the amount of time it could remain operational, as when it ran out of power, it would naturally perish. The problem was that as things stood, Casper would be the one to perish first.

The golem felt unreasonably strong and fast, especially when one considered it was afflicted with the Seal of Enervation, weakening it substantially. With the curse, Jake could at least keep up somewhat and try to stop the damn thing from attacking Casper all the time.

It kept trying to just get away from Jake while going after Casper, but the traps he placed slowed it just enough for Jake to keep up. Seeing as the damn thing didn’t even try to attack Jake, he changed his approach a little, putting away both katars and going in barehanded.

Right as the golem was about to cut through another mass of chains from Casper’s traps, Jake jumped at it. He wrapped his arms and legs around it from the back, pressing his hands into the golem’s body as they both started glowing with a dark green light.

The barrier was sizzling everywhere it made contact with Jake’s body as the passive defenses of Arcane Awakening were constantly under assault. It was nothing compared to what happened when Jake pressed his hands toward the barrier, though, as the air crackled and whipped from the malefic energy rapidly corroding the golem’s defenses.

Just like with the Altmar Census Golem, Jake found that his Touch of the Malefic Viper was a great counter. Barriers like these appeared impenetrable and often had no limit in blocking powerful individual blows, with the only limit being the golem running out of energy. However, constant stress could compromise its integrity. Especially when that constant stress took the form of Touch of the Malefic Viper, an attack that integrated the malefic affinity and could corrupt and corrode anything and everything.

The single-minded golem tried to ignore Jake and keep chasing Casper, but the hunter finally got a response when his hands broke through the barrier and he made physical contact with the golem’s body.

Pressing hard against the chest of the golem, rust began to spread around the palms of his hand as corruption set in. For the first time, the golem reacted to being attacked, instantly stopping its pursuit and exploding with energy to wrestle Jake off.

Scales already covered Jake’s body, and his hold was too strong for him to be thrown off by something like that, so he only hugged the golem tighter. Having failed to easily shake Jake off, the golem swung its sword into its own body, trying to cut off Jake’s hands.

This finally forced Jake to disengage his assault, and the moment he lifted his hands, the barrier reappeared, covering the two large rusty handprints on the golem’s body. The sword slammed into the golem’s own body, rebounding on the barrier as the golem quickly tried to swing again, its arm twisting in an unnatural way until it could even hit its own back.

Forced away entirely, Jake jumped off the golem just in time to avoid the sword. Jake felt that he’d done some serious damage and consumed a lot of the golem’s energy, and he was fully prepared to repeat what he’d just done if the boss continued to only target Casper.

For a moment, he had hope that the B-grade switched target to Jake as it swung its sword toward him again, releasing a wave of lightning that Jake quickly jumped over. However, it didn’t do any kind of follow-up but spun around and charged straight for Casper again, much to Jake’s annoyance.

He instantly used One Step to pursue and quickly got close as the golem naturally ran into even more traps set by the Risen. Jake was just about to wrap himself around the damn thing again, but while he was still in mid-air, the female robotic voice sounded out yet again.

“Core Overcharge: 150% approved.”

Jake’s danger sense reacted as the golem’s body erupted with lightning, sending out a shockwave of electricity that washed over him. His scales crackled and sizzled from the energy, but Jake managed to avoid damage as he was only forced back.

However, as the voice indicated, the golem had done more than just explode. Lightning now wrapped around its body from top to bottom, and the B-grade felt even more powerful than before as he stepped down and shot toward Casper.

The Risen couldn’t keep up with the golem’s speed before, and now he was even more screwed. Jake saw a flash of concern on his friend’s face and didn’t hesitate as he spoke.

“Event Horizon.”

Once more, Jake glimpsed the horizon as the golem was made his sole target. The ring of light appeared around it, but perhaps most importantly, that brief glimpse had made the boss stop moving, buying Casper even more time. Jake could see the Risen was obviously preparing something, and Jake was all-in to help him do whatever he was trying to do.

This use of Event Horizon wasn’t the most exciting, but it still made Jake’s arrows stronger for a while as he started shooting, curving his arrows around to strike the golem in the side. Before, they could barely make the golem react, but now the impacts were powerful enough to make the boss stumble with every hit, helping Casper at least a little.

Jake also tried to help further as he used Eternal Shadow, sending his cursed self sprinting forward toward the golem. His arrows slowed the boss down enough for his Eternal Shadow to reach it and strike it in the leg with a Piercing Fang, making the B-grade stumble for a moment.

More arrows kept striking the golem, disrupting it repeatedly, but the B-grade continued to close in on Casper, who had stopped moving and was down on one knee. There was a ritual circle around him that pulsed with energy that made even Jake feel eerie.

He saw that the Risen still needed a bit more time, making Jake grit his teeth as he looked directly at the golem while continuing to shoot. He activated Primal Gaze, instantly feeling that the golem’s soul was weaker than he’d expected. The boss froze for a moment right as an arrow struck it, and without the ability to stabilize itself, the B-grade was sent flying to the side for a moment.

Right as it could move again and was about to swing its sword and attack Casper from afar, it was hit with yet another Primal Gaze and arrow combo, disrupting it yet again. Jake was already feeling the strain, but he was forced to use Primal Gaze a third time, making his eyes burn as he feared using the skill a fourth time would be a terrible idea.

However... it had been enough. A black smoky aura was emitted from the ritual circle beneath Casper, and when the golem swung and released a crescent wave of rolling lightning, it simply washed over the black smoke harmlessly.

In the middle stood Casper, with no sense of joy or accomplishment on his face. Instead, black trails of tears ran down his cheeks as he looked toward the golem.

“I’m sorry, Lyra,” Casper faintly muttered, a look of regret and pain in his voice. Lyra appeared above him, with a sad yet comforting look on her face. She closed her eyes as all the black smoke funneled toward her, turning her entire body black.

Jake felt her aura fade away, and with a voice full of pain, Casper spoke in a croaky voice.

“Necropolis of Loss.”

Lyra’s body disappeared entirely, exploding in a wave of black smoke that seemed to consume all of existence as it washed over all of them in an instant, as the energy of cursed blight enveloped the world.

... and that’s when Jake learned Casper already had a complete Domain Skill.

Comments

NicN

Tftc

Connor

Thanks for the chapter

Misa

Tftc

C0bra$

Thank u for the story

Arrogant Savant

You know, it's easy to forget how Casper and Lyra got so close in the first place because of how mundane it was.

Gavin

Wait wtf ... Im assuming this is similar to a trans skill in that it has a significant backlash like loss of Lyra for awhile?

Fdrugc

Tftc is Lyra dead?

Sol

Damn minagas gonna get some stick after this 😂

definitelynotbrjenness

I suspect weakened or temporarily gone. I'd think Casper would use an escape skill before permanently sacrificing her.

Matthew Smith

I wonder if its somewhat like the king in the mask situation. Lyra gets "sacrificed" for a huge power boost but she is returned to a soul form stuck coma like trance in the necklace until casper can do "x" to get her back.

Rewdan

Wow this is simply amazing. I’m stuck here filled with anticipation and having to wait to Tuesday for the next chapter. This Friday cliffhanger hits HARDER,!

Alexander C Hyde

His ethereal body was sheared off, and immediately, Jake knew that the Risen had actually taken quite a bit of damage. (Wasn’t Casper back to corporeal form in the last chapter?)

Rewdan

That’s what I’m hoping for I think That’s what Casper said a few chapters ago. Still sad.

Wselby64

Wondering of the possibility of jake helping lyra with her evolution as repayment and to help his mate or if ghosts count as enlightened

Arieh Sochaczevski

No way Casper has a skill that completely sacrificed her. At most it will leave her bodiless for a while.

Swinter

There's no way Lyra is dead, considering the lengths Casper went to get her back. Which means whatever they're doing is a temporary sacrifice. Which means Casper being so sorrowful seems... Odd. Unless it's just because it's painful and he hates causing her pain. Because if she Does die from it, that'd be wildly out of character compared to what have been presented so far. Will be interesting to see next week.

Alexander C Hyde

He activated Primal Gaze, instantly feeling that (while) the golem’s soul was weaker than he’d expected. (Is the selected word needed?)

Devillelouch

Creative use of skills, good callbacks to show growth, shows the weakness of event horizon, and keeps the enemy being terrifying, while keeping up high skill usage and high damage. Keeps the high marks, pacing is closest to lowering. Come on Jake Juicing the golem to create a body for Lyra, it would improve the soul bound item to be a golem with the locket. The reason it won't happen is you would want to empower Jacob at the same time.

djthomp

Well dang, that got dangerous real quick. Not feeling happy thoughts about what might be happening to Lyra.

Kyler

Idk if Casper would like Jake's juice inside Lyra.

Seiryus

It probably hurts her a lot, or it makes her disperse for a while. There's no way he'd risk her actual death when fleeing was still on the table.

Eike M

It's probably written that way to make for a better cliffhanger.

Thekoopa20

That or it causes her immense pain and the strength of the skill comes from the strong emotions felt by both of them. Casper’s love and guilt for inflicting her pain and Lyra’s love and acceptance of said pain. But loss seems like a stronger term than that so you’re probably more accurate than me on it being a full on sacrifice skill, similar to Jacob and Bertram but stronger and with more backlash on Lyra

Loststar7

Thanks for the chapter and another evil cliffhanger. Hope everyone has a great weekend. Edit suggestion: He activated Primal Gaze, instantly feeling that w̶h̶i̶l̶e̶ the golem’s soul was weaker than he’d expected

Zimidiaz

"He activated Primal Gaze, instantly feeling that while the golem’s soul was weaker than he’d expected." Is the "while" supposed to be here or is there supposed to be a second half to this sentence

Cory S.

ON TODAY’S EPISODE OF, THE PRIMAL HUNTER! The Labyrinth Master has fallen! But wait! Just when victory seemed guaranteed, a terrifying transformation begins! Fueled by a bolt of blue lightning, the boss rises from the ashes! No longer a cyborg of flesh and blood, it has become a machine of pure destruction! Behold the Aginian Crisis Protocol Golem! Jake’s Arcane Powershot strikes true, yet it is useless against the Golem’s impenetrable barrier! The situation is dire for Casper! As a being of ghostly energy, the Risen is critically weak against the Golem’s lightning attacks! The mechanical monstrosity ignores Jake entirely, focusing its unrelenting fury solely on eradicating Casper! Desperate to save his friend, Jake engages the beast in brutal close quarters combat! He wraps his limbs around the metallic giant, using the Touch of the Malefic Viper to corrode its defenses! But the enemy is too strong! The Golem overcharges its core to one hundred and fifty percent capacity, unleashing a shockwave of devastation! With Casper on the brink of death, Jake pushes his Primal Gaze to the absolute limit! He strains his very soul to buy his ally mere seconds of time! In a heartbreaking turn of events, Casper bids a tearful farewell to Lyra! A massive explosion of black smoke swallows the arena! The Risen has unleashed a power that defies belief! A Domain Skill known as the Necropolis of Loss! Will this tragic sacrifice be enough to stop the mechanical menace? Can the Primal Hunter and the Risen survive this overwhelming power? Find out next time on! THE PRIMAL HUNTER!

Greendalf

Pretty sure Lyra is like Bertram where she can’t really “die” unless the thing she is bound to is destroyed (the locket bound to Casper)

Xander

TFTC :) Have a fun weekend peeps :) Suggested edits: "Jake *retreated* backwards," redundant because what other direction do you retreat in? :) Change retreated to "shot" or "flew" or ditch "backwards" maybe. "*fueling* energy into the corpse" should be "funneling" "avoid being caught *up to*." awkward phrasing. ditch these two. "Having failed to easily *get Jake off*" you said you go for americanisms so I'll just say, phrasing :D maybe try "remove Jake/the threat" instead " instantly feeling that while the golem’s soul was weaker than he’d expected. " missing the end of the sentence or "while" is excess. "over the black *spoke* harmlessly." should be "smoke"

Xander

Well yes. Shes been dead since the tutorial. As for if shes destroyed utterly? Fuck no, this is going to be a risen version of the HC sacrifice abilities. She gonna be out of action for a good long while recovering most likely.

Grant

Isn't Lyra already a pinnacle race? She is the blightfathers perfected race was my understanding.

Wselby64

Oh maybe I can't remember how she was really created or revived or whatever you would call it

Dan

If I'm remembering correctly, her true soul actually remains inside Casper's locket, which means this isn't likely her dying. I'm guessing it's a powerful skill with a LOT of drawbacks for Lyra, including heavy emotional strain since this looks like an insane concentration of incredibly sad curse energy he just flooded her body with. Can't wait for Monday's chapter!

marland lewis

Surged backwards? Also any direction other than the direction the danger is located can be considered a retreat

Daniel Jackson-Woods

No, he re-entered ethereal form in this chapter to avoid the boss until the lightning attacks tore through him

Daniel Jackson-Woods

Its a domain skill Casper empowers Lyra to emirates a domain which probably isnt easy on either of them

Daniel Jackson-Woods

Going to be treated like a transcendent ability meaning a super long recovery or Lyra is gone til B grade. Could be a skill only usable once per grade until godhood when he can do it whenever

ABTelford

Wow, this battle in intense! Jake having defend someone is a new and interesting dynamic. I thoroughly enjoyed it!

IntenseSushi

Tftc yesss gimme that domain expansion

Bobo

Ty

David Hall

Lyra's true soul is tied to the locket so she not dead. Her loving boyfriend/phylactery just used despair energy or something to blow her up and cover everything in sadness vibes. Is this where we find about how Pride "wanes in despair"? Jakes domain-like affect is suppressed or is far weaker than normal?

Rewdan

Very interesting however I think it is if Jake despairs

Greendalf

Yeah, from book 2: “[Lyra’s Locket (Legendary)] – A locket created to house the soul of a single mortal. Touched by the Blightfather, the soul has gained Strength, and the locket has become a phylactery for her soul. Yet the locket is also bound to you for eternity; your life and death are now forever intertwined.”

blucube 14

Thanks for the chapter!

Xander

Heading away from the target is definitionally backwards because forwards is towards the enemy. You must be getting further from the enemy otherwise its not a retreat at all but a tactical redeployment.

Colton Horton

Well, it's been stated that curses are fueled by emotions, so it's probably them both remembering when Lyra died, and experiencing that genuine loss in order to empower the Domain. If they're both feeling that loss like the first time again, it would absolutely make sense that he would apologize for her having to relive that experience.

tigerfishie

TYFTC! After three days I was finally able to catch up 🙏

Bryandbc01

Has it been confirmed that Jake will get race quests at level 349 or not? He’ll most definitely reach it after this boss and I assume he won’t get one again.

ThatGuy

No confirmation either way. Literally no one in the book knows the answer so the only way to get confirmation would be to read Zogarths mind

BumAssBumAss

This is definitely not transcendence in any way. Pushing one's limits doesn't need to be transcendence. This is likely a high level skill Casper cannot easily use, like overusing a boosting skill. First sage previously stated that a normal C grade would be at their limit merely activating own mythical skill. I assume this is a high tier mythical skill Casper is using.

Gavin

So notice I said similar in that it has drawbacks. That's the thing I was comparing it too. It's obviously not a trans skill

ThatGuy

Arguing over semantics is lame. It reads well. The extra descriptions clarify his direction. Retreating upwards is also an option from an enemy on the ground or retreating down from an enemy flying. Or retreating towards Casper etc.

Jan

Emo-Casper using the strength of Sadness was not on my bingo card, but I kinda like the idea

Fyrtue

While it hasn't been confirmed I don't think he'll get one for evolving to B grade. His race still hasn't changed into whatever it's going to be and my understanding is that it needs to do that before he will get a race quest.

Fyrtue

He already has the basis of it with Event Horizon. The end of its description is "for now, a mere glimpse of the Event Horizon is all you are capable of, knowing it carries the promise of an endless domain to one day make your own." I reckon it will be some time before it goes beyond it's current form to something greater.

JW Saxby

🤣🤣 🖤

JW Saxby

Tyftc 👍🏼🍻

khielira

I think we need to ask if Casper skill can identify allies from enemies. Because it would suck to have a skill that harms your allies when you are fighting in a party

Lesley Holmes

Ok so thanks for the chapter. Getting really fed up of the errors and sloppy writing spoiling a good story. Take five minutes to read through your work please.

definitelynotbrjenness

concept of sadness. loneliness regret. despair. maybe ghost kings peak through their own gate.

David Hall

Hazards of Domain effects and if this is the trump card mentioned two chapters ago He wouldn't be using it during every encounter considering the cost to Lyra is probably pretty big.

Rob Lyon

I also think that pride of the malefic Viper will be an element of his domain

NovaZero

Just winding down the window.

Rob Lyon

It won't kill her unless Casper dies but it does seem like it will have some kind of lasting negative effect at least for a while

NovaZero

Racial Evolution Quest:

Rob Lyon

Yeah the only way to truly kill her is either to destroy the locket or kill Casper

Rob Lyon

Yeah of course use that she's a ghost. Rehear soul is tied to both the locket and Casper's soul so the only way to truly kill her is to destroy the locket or kill Casper

Asher Mack

Calm your bitch ass down

James Drezner

If you notice, most of the chapters he post have comments pointing out typos and other mistakes. He gladly accepts feedback so if you're going to complain at least specify where those errors are. Otherwise you just sound ungrateful of early access to chapter DRAFTS.

JohnSnowden

You can go to Royal road or wait for the books to release if it bothers you that badly. Patreon is early access chapters, there's bound to be some mistakes

Josie

You're paying this subscription for an early release. It's a rough draft not a finished product. You do not have to pay this subscription if this fact boggles your mind.

ex7999999999999

If you want a perfectly edited copy fuck off untill the finished book is published.

Kimesh

Great fight so far! I like seeing Casper the halfghost in Action. Cant wait for the Minagabashing later.

Kimesh

I also must say, I can not stop visiulizing Villys face when his chosen would be squashed by JONES. That would be a turn of things no one would have seen coming.

P A J

Listen man, I understand spelling and grammatical errors can mess people up, but at the very least you could point out the errors, we get these chapters way earlier than everyone else, so obviously theres gonna be a few mistakes here and there, no need to be rude about it

hocusfire

Zogarth appreciates the correction, not your privileged tantrum. He doesn't need to do patreon, it's merely a formality for us, so be grateful

hocusfire

He had to evolve o Malefic Viper skills to legendary last time, perhaps its the same thing but mythical this time?

oak

Huh? You do the race evo quest to evolve into that race.

oak

Damn the Goth couple got a domain expansion

Alexandre8901

Nice Cliff! Good week end everyone!

Colin

I hate/adore you for the fact that I completely read that whole thing in the old announcer voice from Dragon Ball Z…. 🤣🪦

Cory S.

That is the whole idea. I loved DBZ when I was a teenager

GloinJr

When? From what I remember he's never had to do anything for his race as the implication is that his race is naturally b-grade or greater. Were you thinking about his profession evolution?

Cory Smith

Must be new here and not long for this universe if you keep that shit up.

Cory Smith

Definitely, Uncle Jake does have cool friends!

Cory Smith

Hey, name thief, I’d like my name back. 🤪🤣

Martinus Chrisjan

We definitely don't need this kind of entitlement here. These are fresh drafts, not edited book-ready chapters. We're lucky to have them.

ABTelford

Weekend question: in chapter 1239, Villy gives Jake the bounty token to cash in the bounty for killing the dragon…will he ever do that? It could be a fun side-quest. And yes, I’m reading back chapters because I want Mmoooooorrre!

Cory S.

Depending on your age, I’ve had it longer. 42yrs

Tamathon

Woooowwww. Guess we found the unappreciative E grade of the group.

Tamathon

Omg I did too!!!

Strato Junon

Will be taking a break from patreon. I'll be back in a few months I'm sure. Thanks for all the chapters!

definitelynotbrjenness

don't forget to come here and ask us trivia questions about the more interesting things you read. I stick with my prediction that someone comes up to Jake in some random place to pay him

Doorda

I'm going with the theory villy sends him after the dungeon (not immediately) but sometime

aforce05

Doesn’t villy still need to feed Jake his little yip snack before the b grade evo?

definitelynotbrjenness

One of the people that will be sitting around doing nothing besides trying to tell everyone else what to do after the system apocalypse of 2034.

definitelynotbrjenness

It will be funny if at b grade Jake's race changes to juvenile REDACTED

definitelynotbrjenness

I've figured out how the system will be created. A billionaire gets upset that the professional athlete he just gave 80 million a year to gets hurt in his first game. He tells his secret and very illegal AI to come up with a way to know a person's true status, abilities, and potential. The AI hacks into a secret government facility and releases nanobots. After the billionaire passes away, the ai decides to release the access to "the system" to everybody.

Elijah Soleil

I love that idea, I feel like Jake is a natural born god but it would be kinda lame if we got no racial updates until godhood.

Xien

Oh wowwwww Casper is going to put a hurting on Minaga… did not see that coming

Daniel

He is eating the desolate orb. I think that would be a power up, but yeah I think that’s why he has 4 levels of alchemy left.

Leigh Micheletti

TYFTC! But very sad. I finally caught up and now have to wait for each individual chapter to be posted. 😂

definitelynotbrjenness

Jake and Casper exit the dungeon. Miranda is waiting for them with a wrapped present. Jake gives it to Casper, "a little gift as a thank you for doing the dungeon with me." Casper unwraps it and is confused why Jake would give him black lipstick, mascara, and black hair die." Jake tells him he wants to support his life decisions and understands that this isn't just an emo phase he is going through.

Asher Mack

Always a rough feeling - especially being this close to B grade and all the exciting developments that will bring.

Asher Mack

I think it'd be more like natural S grade can't see anyone being a natural born god - but I do think we will at least get some kind of race upgrade at B grade. I'm honestly just interested to see how his bloodline evolves the most

definitelynotbrjenness

if you email zogsrth a really good explicitly detailed fanfic about Jacob and casper's love affair, he sometimes gives sneak peeks at upcoming chapters . on a totally unrelated matter, don't ever believe anything I tell you.

Josie

Couldn't Minaga mass produce C-grade Minagas and launch them all at the 93rd universe now that it's opening up? Could be fun

ThatGuy

He did that cause he wanted to. Not because he had to

Shandlar

He almost certainly already has done so years ago I imagine.

Jeryd Greer

WHEN I WAS, A YOUNG BOY, MY FATHER TOOK ME INTO The City

Alex

I caught up mid orange fuck fight

Alex

Thus I feel your pain

Kt-x

Thanks for the chapter

Strato Junon

I lied. I'm already back. It's an addiction honestly

Sonny Herman

I feel like Zog wanted to make this dungeon a whole book but someone told him not too so thats why minaga forgot to give them the lore book and why its so fast forwarded, not complaining, i love how its flowing though. I feel i would get bored reading dungeon clearing over and over. Thank you for the chapters

Nicole Sparks

I’ve been re-reading the books on KU and just finished 14. I can’t believe how far the story has come since then! Jake’s about to confront the Holy rollers about Ell’Kabong’s soul. Yes, I know, wrong names but I’m really bad at recalling the correct ones. I can’t wait until March to at least finish that arc so I’ll be reading on RR or here. Probably RR since their interface is better on my phone.

Chloe

Tyftc