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Jake definitely hadn’t been the person to write this little speech himself, especially not the opening line, though he did add some parts of his personality and whatnot into it. In all honesty, he wanted to add more, but he was sure not to change anything that could affect what was communicated.

If he had been fine making a somewhat offensive speech, Jake would have gone a lot further and called them out more for what had happened last time he visited Venus. However, he also understood that would probably be counterproductive.

The first part of the opening was there to communicate that Jake was here in a very different capacity than last time. This was no longer about his own personal feelings, but solely about what he represented.

It was not an admonishment of what the natives had done, but an opportunity. The admonishment was veiled, and if they understood what they were dealing with, the threat of what would happen should they not accept the invitation was very much implied.

Of course, to have the slightest chance of success, Jake needed the people present to actually believe his words, which was what the ritual circle was there for. It wasn’t time to fully activate it yet, though.

“The multiverse is vast beyond your imagination, and this opportunity will allow you to get a glimpse into what it may have to offer. The system has given the Order of the Malefic Viper and all others of the multiverse a chance to participate in an event, and now, I shall extend that invitation to you.”

Jake had thought that selling the Order of the Malefic Viper more would have been smart, like talking about how powerful they were and the people in it, but evidently, the Viper didn’t think so. Instead, Jake was to focus on the World of the Exalted Prima.

Waving his hand, he activated another layer of formations, and a massive projection appeared above him, visible to all. It displayed an image of a Seat of the Exalted Prima, one of the large space stations that were present in many of the galaxies throughout the ninety-third universe.

“Upon the initiation of the ninety-third universe – the universe this Minor World is placed within – an event came along with it. One that has already progressed through several stages, and now the battle has moved to the World of the Exalted Prima. A reality beyond this one. An entire world that all are to fight for, created by the system as one large battleground to be conquered. Almost like a game, to the extent where death isn’t even real, as should one perish within the World of the Exalted Prima, they shall simply appear within the real world again.”

Again, this direction of the speech felt odd, as Jake was effectively just explaining the system event to them all, which in his opinion felt a bit like putting the cart before the horse. What was the point of explaining all of this to them if they weren’t going to work together, anyway?

What’s more, they already knew parts of this, hence why they had brought potential recruits. They didn’t know the details, sure, but they had some knowledge which made this all feel a bit wasteful, and Jake would prefer to speak as little as possible.

Still, Jake trusted the Viper as he continued.

“So far, the event has progressed through several stages, and the newest one has come with an opportunity. One I seek to take advantage of, using all of you. I, the Chosen of the Malefic Viper, command the Territory belonging to the Milky Way Galaxy. The Galaxy Venus is placed within. This new stage allows me to recruit individuals who are to join my Territory within the World of the Exalted Prima, individuals who I believe can be useful to my efforts and goals.”

Jake scanned the area with Pulse, but found it incredibly hard to read the reactions of anyone present, and those he could read, he didn’t find very useful. Most people who showed emotion mainly frowned or looked curious, while the Nomads primarily looked full of reverence simply at hearing him speak. He did spot some who looked doubtful, though hopefully the next part would dispel some of that doubt.

“You might be asking yourself: why would the Order of the Malefic Viper, a faction with power far beyond this insignificant Minor World, need to recruit you of all people? Why not simply recruit members of the Order if it’s so powerful?”

Clearly, this hit the nail on the head for many as they unconsciously nodded, and it was a good question. Without the context of how the World of the Exalted Prima worked, it truly wouldn’t make any sense, as the Order definitely had armies both stronger and infinitely more loyal than these natives from Venus.

“In truth, we don’t need to recruit any of you or give you this opportunity. However, doing so is more efficient. Recruiting individuals into the World of the Exalted Prima comes at a cost, but this cost is significantly reduced when bringing in natives of the new universe. You all count as these natives. As you saw with the few from your factions who briefly left this Minor World, the system favors those newly integrated. I am here to take advantage of that favor, while extending an opportunity to you. A mutually beneficial arrangement that truly only comes with benefits, both in the short-and long-term.”

Once again, Jake scanned the people observing him, and it seemed that he had at least alleviated some doubt while also making others more curious. Good going so far, he hoped.

“As I said, this will also come with the opportunity to work with the Order of the Malefic Viper. At first, as soldiers of our army, fighting for us, but also for yourselves. The World of the Exalted Prima is an opening into a new world that those chosen can explore, and should they perish, safely return here to report back. No one from the Order will stop them from doing so. That I swear upon the name of the Malefic Viper.”

Not really an oath Jake put much stock in, being a Heretic and all, and he wasn’t sure how effective it was with these natives who had little knowledge of gods and such in the first place. Hopefully it did something, though. At least the Nomads seemed impressed at him swearing on the name of a Primordial...

Also, it was a bit embarrassing to say, but only after Jake started this speech and relayed it did he start to understand some of the reasons why it was structured this way. Villy clearly knew that he couldn’t just fully lean on intimidation and his name as a god, which made him also communicate the benefits even if Jake turned out to be bullshitting or exaggerating details regarding the Order.

The part about allowing natives to return to Venus and report everything going on in the virtual world was also fully genuine, as that would only benefit Jake. Even if it were a limited world, it would be entirely different from anything they’d ever seen, and all who experienced it would be shocked, no matter what. At the very least, it would prove many of Jake’s claims without disproving any of what he’d said, and they would interact with other major factions of the multiverse, as well as with members of the Order and others serving Jake.

Even if they weren’t converted, they would at least be witnesses.

In other words, all they really needed was for the Venusians and Arachnecs to “sacrifice” some decent B-grades, and it would be a victory for Jake. He also didn’t doubt that those who did experience the World of the Exalted Prima would be hungry for more after dying in the World Wonder, which would only further his efforts and the goals of the Order.

Jake had purposefully made a dramatic pause after swearing on the Viper, and after taking a deep breath, as if merely having muttered those words had taken a lot out of him, he continued.

Continued on to another part of the speech he was a little nervous about.

“You will come to learn just how ignorant you all are. As natives of a small world like this, you know nothing of what lurks beyond your border. Listen to your kin who get a glimpse of the multiverse. View this as another opportunity to learn. Learn of your ignorance, learn of your foolishness, and only then, when you understand how little you truly know, you’ll comprehend the errors of your ways. This is an opportunity, yes, but know that there will come a choice.”

Jake activated another part of the ritual that amplified his aura. Not the part he had laid down, as the time hadn’t come yet, but still one that would be useful to relay his next words.

Fully unleashing his aura as the Chosen of the Malefic Viper, Jake allowed all present to experience it, even if they knew from last time he’d tried this that it was far from as effective as usual. These natives of Venus did not know its meaning and significance, but only felt that Jake had a “fake” powerful aura that seemed borrowed. They did not understand it, and while a lot of comprehension did spark some fear, it had not been enough to convince them.

“The ninety-third universe is still in a state of integration. It’s limited by who can travel to it, but in due time, it will fully open up and become just another universe. Even before that, it will have been divided up among the top factions. Venus is already in a domain claimed by the Order of the Malefic Viper. But do not misunderstand; that doesn’t mean you are part of the Order. It means you live under our mercy.”

Jake had finally started with the actual threats, which honestly were more just clarifying the situation to the natives of the Minor World. Still, he could definitely feel a few responses as auras flared temporarily from people not happy with what he’d said, and below, he felt the Great Sea Serpent also slightly stir, ready to make his appearance.

Feeling the dissatisfaction among many in the crowd, Jake had to steel himself as he continued, as his next words weren’t exactly less inflammatory:

“Do my words offend you? Why? Are you going to tell me that you’ve ruled this world since its dawn? That it isn’t suddenly under the control of some unknown faction because they say it is? Don’t get me wrong. I understand your frustration when confronted with reality. But it doesn’t change anything. In the grand scheme of the universe, you are weak. Too weak to resist the will of others. Too weak to be given a choice... unless you prove you’re worthy of being listened to. Prove that you have individuals who could one day reach godhood and achieve immortality.”

This part of the speech Jake genuinely wasn’t sure of as it felt like something he’d tried to communicate before, and again, that hadn’t exactly gone well. Once more, it wasn’t that anything said was wrong, but that he was saying things no one in the position of the natives wanted to hear. It was a cruel fact born of a cruel multiverse.

The weak didn’t have the right to decide their own fates but were at the mercy of others. No one would bat an eye if a god destroyed the entire Minor World and every creature within it. Not if that god had claimed ownership of the world.

It wasn’t a reality Jake liked, but one he understood. Law of the Jungle and all that. It was somewhat what the natives of Venus already understood, but they were now learning that the jungle they believed they lived in was far bigger than they’d ever believed and inhabited by predators beyond their wildest imaginations.

“I see that the leaders of the Arachnecs and Venusians have shown up today. I feel your auras. You approach the peak of A-grade, knowing that even if you hit that peak, all that awaits you is an insurmountable wall. One that no creature of this world has ever broken through. Act well, and that wall will be torn down for not just you, but all creatures of this world. You have already shown you have the talent to reach where you are today, and with the help of the Order, you can go even further.”

Jake spoke directly to the leaders now, using a part of the speech Jake would naturally only have needed to use should the leaders show up. As stated earlier, he hadn’t expected them to show, but based on the Viper forcing him to memorize this part, clearly, the snake god had other expectations.

“In some ways, you are unbelievably lucky to be found this early on during the integration. I started out this speech by saying you should congratulate yourselves and revel in the fortune of this encounter, and I wish to reiterate those words. This truly is a stroke of luck. Having your Minor World in the domain of the Chosen of the Malefic Viper is luck you cannot even comprehend. Being given the chance to help the Order is indeed an opportunity others would kill for. It being this early in the integration also gives you some power. Grounds for negotiation, as long as you still know your place.”

To Jake, this part felt a little contradictory. He had just spoken about how pathetically weak they were, and now, he suddenly talked about them having some power to negotiate. While knowing their place, sure, but any negotiation still required some level of equality, right? Jake could only guess this was to give them hope, which the next part supported.

“I can even share that it’s not uncommon for places existing within the dominion of the Order to remain autonomous. Of course, this requires trust and competency, but most importantly, worthiness. A great way to prove yourselves worthy is to contribute to the Order of the Malefic Viper, and the World of the Exalted Prima is an opportunity to do just that. How can you not call that fortunate?”

More truths that could easily be interpreted as rather offensive, but Jake didn’t them long to linger long on the words before he kept talking.

“Finally, before you represent those who wish to get the privilege of joining my Territory in the World of the Exalted Prima, allow me to make one thing absolutely clear: you will do so as soldiers. You will follow orders, act as commanded, and strive to further my goals. This is non-negotiable, and should you refuse to do so, not only will you suffer the consequences, but so may your entire race for failing to prove itself useful.”

Needless to say, this had to be emphasized if Jake wanted to avoid having people join the World of the Exalted Prima only to have them fuck around and do nothing. He did need soldiers who could think for themselves – that was kind of the entire point of this, as if not, they could just recruit more NPCs – but too much independence could also become a problem.

“However, I also know that loyalty is not built in a day. As I stand here, I can feel the doubt from many of you. The lingering questions, asking just how much I’ve said is true, how much is overexaggeration, and how many things I still keep hidden. I even feel a bit of killing intent here and there, shown by those ignorant of the consequences should they act.”

Jake had wondered whether this part should be included if there wasn’t anyone showing killing intent, but honestly, was it ever possible that he wouldn't piss off at least one person enough to want to kill him? There weren’t many of them, but he definitely felt a few here and there, which was good enough.

However, he had to admit that things were going damn smoothly so far. None of the powerful A-grades had raised their voices and objected. Nobody had interrupted him or created trouble, despite all the things he’d said. In fact, they were acting far more respectfully than Jake had assumed they would, making him think that a lot had changed in the last year or so since he left Venus the first time.

“Naturally, it goes without saying that should you act against the Order, not only you, but your entire race and perhaps this whole world may find itself destroyed as punishment. That would be such a waste. Meanwhile, should you act wisely, you will come to learn the benefits and reach new heights. For some, this has already started to happen. Many Nomads have sworn loyalty to the Order, and we even have a few fully fledged members here now. A select few who’ve been granted the privilege early due to their dedication, and witnessing them, I expect you to see the wisdom in their choice.”

With those words, Jake summoned the prime example of this as beneath him, the likely most powerful creature of Venus stirred as the massive sea serpent started to rise. Jake stood there dramatically as the aura of the peak A-grade flared, still finding many aspects of this entire speech questionable, but nevertheless still just going along with everything.

Comments

Unwillingmainer

Trust Villy Jake. The speech will both work and likely set you up for some fun at your own expense come the ritual. But it will work.

Arrogant Savant

The more surprising thing is how Jake's pride isn't crushed by failing when using the "Jake way" the first time around. Trust the speech director Jake!

Ashen

Jake going full wuxia Young master on this speech 🤣

Loststar7

Happy Monday and thanks for the chapter.

Daniel Brian

Aura farming in a way only a gigantic snake can. 😎

Crimson Ender

"Hey, you guys are real lucky. You get to serve me without getting wiped out. That's a bonus!" I love it, the absolute arrogance of it while still being fully true is part of why I love this series. Tyftc! Can't wait for tomorrow!!

Mitha

So there's still the special part of the ritual AND the item the serpent brought. Gonna get spicy for sure.

djthomp

So far so good. Hold the line, Jake, you are here for the frog and turtle cavalry and to get them you need to not screw up this speech.

NicN

Tftc

DerangedMan

Thank you for not ending here on Friday. This cliff feels worse to me.

Lemonsqueezy

Okay, might just be my ADHD here, but this part of the story is getting a little long in the tooth. Been 4 chapters now about a speech.

Staudi

All for the turtle riding frogs !

Hoosier201

Nice work Villy, I’m sure the natives find the speech un-frog-gettable! Truly ribbeting stuff and I’m hoptimistic it will work. 🐸🐸🐸 I’ll see myself out lol

C0bra$

Thank u for the story

zozzy the beast

I have this suspicion that the artifact that villy wanted. Will either allow villy to project some minor power or spread his aura across the entire minor world during the ritual. We will see.

Justin

Maybe it can somehow allow the great snake to evolve to S grade in front of everyone there. That’d be a display for sure

Lucas Callahan

I will happily give up the rest of this week's chapters if we not only get frog knights but a scene with the Casper saying "WTF Jake?!?" due to the unknown undead armies. That said I am also looking forward to seeing Sim-Jake shenanigans, especially when someone eventually recognizes him

Tomer Yud

well its an important speech

Grimsayer

I'd laugh if the formation shows a holographic projection of the danger noodle statue that sculptor made.

zran

A good story needs a good setup, this is that setup, feels slow, but will likely pay off later

Gracie

tftc! 🐍🏹💬

Lemonsqueezy

Probably just an ADHD moment, I want to see what this ritual is going to do and Zog just keeps teasing

Maleko

"but Jake didn't them long to linger long on..." -> "but Jake didn't give them long to linger on..." or similar

Niels Valkenborgh

Thanks for the chapter. Ironically Jake is lucky nobody with a bloodline similar to his is born on this planet. He would probably be dead meat if that were the case with all this talk about "I'm so much more important than you." People who are more important than you rarely have to make that case in a grand speech.

Sayjinlord

Just trust the process Jake and think about the Frog-Turtle Calvary.

Kjell

Tftc

Spenser Williams

I agree completely...cutting away from the speech every paragraph to say Jake is still nervous and then to explain what is readily apparent from the words of the speech itself is a bit insulting to the reader's intelligence. This speech isn't some grand, complicated thing. The writing would be much stronger if he just let the implications be communicated to us as well as the natives of Venus from the speech itself...we aren't dumb enough to need every paragraph explained. I'm so ready for Venus to be over with, it's just not very interesting, and ultimately it's in support of a system event that I'm hoping Jake is not even a major part of for a while so he can do some actual leveling in the real world.

thkiwow

Yeah. Fact is, they got greedy when they geard jake's "master" couldn't come to their little planet. But really, they are lucky to be able to negotiate. Usually they'd be wiped out like insects by a wandering S grade. Like it's one of those things where people will try to do what the chosen likes even if he didn't ask for it just to try and win his favour.

InfernoDroid

Tbh, it's not too long if the chapters were combined into 2 chapters. one, pre speech, one starting with today's chapter until the end. It's just the wait between chapters that makes it feel so long. Honestly, it's probably the main issue with this format of writing. The pacing never feels correct to the people consuming the chapters in release, and chapters feel oddly structured when it becomes a book. I still remember when read the first book and it had around 90 chapters, i was like ..... what???? Why are there so many short chapters (I was used to reading classically written books whose chapters where 3-5x as long as these, with far fewer, more structured chapters.)

zozzy the beast

Oh that's a good idea to. I like that one.

Endern

Considering this is his first religous sermon, and will likely convert armies into the Order following and trusting his Patron's orders, this might be the most Chosen-like behavior Jake has done to date. I see levels on the horizon.

CT

Using giant snake as prop. It is so...... Malefic.

Noah Mclelland

I think Jake's pride gets hurt when its regarding something he actually cares for or that he thinks hes good at He knows he cant do speeches well lol.

Hoosier201

I think Venus and the whole experience of introducing Venus to the multiverse is pretty important to Jake’s character growth. There have been a bunch of totally new experiences outside of Jake’s established strengths/comfort zone. It was definitely the most humbled he’s been with just how bad his first visit went due to his own errors. This speech/recruitment is also one of the first times he’s acting as a true Chosen. I agree that reading about him going crazy with an army of frog cavalry and undead spiders is going to be awesome, but I think its important for him to actually struggle to earn their respect and following. A lot of stuff comes really easily to him; its a nice change when something doesn’t.

Rewdan

This statement is both horrible and humorous at the same time 😖 😂😂

Rewdan

Now that’s a something I’d not considered 👏👏👏

ABTelford

So far so fun! I’m liking this well crafted speech. I’m also hoping Jake learns how to socialize a bit better but whatever. His flaws make him fun.

ABTelford

No he can’t take a call, he’s busy speechifying.

ABTelford

I agree that it’s nice to see him struggle. That’s where interesting things happen. 🙂

Breaker 277

No, the speech didn’t need a “smelly pot” threats!

mrthorwahl

It will be even more fun once some of them join the event and ask what usually happens when an unaligned minor force attacks the Chosen of a primordial.

Jason Rollins

I’m with you but to be fair, this is Jake subjugating his first (minor) world. This is a pretty big deal in the grand scheme of things to do as a B-grade. It also goes perfectly with being the Chosen of the Malefic Viper, even if you disregard all the beneficial aspects of the minor world for the Order. This is a huge stepping stone for Jake and if it takes more chapters to properly lay everything down with this, I’m more than fine with that

Gh0st-Hunt3r

I hate that it will take multiple chapters to get this ritual done lol I'm anxious to see the climax 😁

Jaxkie

Thank you for the chapter

hadjar darkhan

I was thinking "let them linger long "

TeamNoPants

If I had to guess, the great sea serpent will evolve to S grade in the next chapter

shawnallenthompson

My hope is that, in addition to the aura amplification, the ritual Jake is doing conjures a giant hologram of the "danger noodle" statue Jake has back at home. It would truly be awe-inspiring for the masses, and cringe-inducing for Jake.

SmokeJam

Didn't expect an IRL politician cosplay, but it isn't a bad one.

Adam

My bet: that giant snake isn’t going to be an A grade for much longer 👍 hence “the artefact”

Spenser Williams

If there were interesting things happening in those chapters that laid interesting groundwork, then I'd agree...but the last 4 chapters have read like stalling, not introducing anything new, just reiterating information about the minor world that we already know while Jake is doing the young master schtick and an A grade kissing up to him, which isn't interesting either. I agree this world needed some closure after his first visit, which was a good learning experience, but it's in the context of him having evolved over a year ago, and having barely gained like 4 levels since then that makes it grating to see the story proceed at a snail's pace. This could've easily been wrapped up in 4 chapters, and instead Jake has spent 4 chapters ruminating on random stuff and barely getting through his speech. All in all, this chapter covered about 30 seconds of time in the story...in the grand scheme of things, that's a lot of words spent on Jake talking to a bunch of minor characters at best. I'm all about world building, but the only new info we've gotten in these chapters is that Jake is planning to hunt the Lich and Horned Slayer at some point...which won't be relevant to the story for another 10 of our years at the rate it's moving now.

Terra

Yay tyftc!! Trust in Villy!!

Xander

TFTC :) Welcome back everyone :) Suggested edits: " in a *whole other* capacity than last time" weird phrase. try "very different" instead. "*Alas*, Jake trusted" should be "Still". As before "alas" is for a regretful tone, something you dislike or are unhappy about. " the *head on the nail* for many" should be "nail on the head" "That I swear *upon in* the name of the Malefic Viper.” you can use either but not both. I would suggest ditching "upon" "return to *Venus* and report everything going on *in Venus* " repetitive. If they have returned ofc they are reporting in Venus. Ditch the second. "it would prove many of Jake’s claims *while not disproving any of what he’d said*" repetitive thought. Ditch everything after "claims". "that he *would* piss off at least" should be "wouldn't"

Bruce K

This recruitment arc is getting as long as the year he spent on a time-out in the order. We don't need this much detail about the Venusians. Let's get back to Sim-Jake and Miranda kicking ass.

definitelynotbrjenness

it's a villy scale and it is how we find out this hidden world was once visited by villy.

Gman

the snake will be the first S GRADE

Catfan

Typos: Jake didn’t them long to linger long on the words before he kept talking -> give is missing after didn't; also the sentence uses 'long' twice. The second one is unnecessary. was it ever possible that he *would* piss off at least one person enough to want to kill him? -> wouldn't

JW Saxby

What a build up 👏😁👏 Zog, you are a master of storytelling 👍🏼👍🏼 Tyftc 🍻