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last three pages of ch. 17! (Patreon)

Published:
2020-09-05 17:00:02
Imported:
2026-06
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IT'S DONE...

I was actually surprised at the direction this flashback took. Originally I had the Evil Father execute them both, but... it just didn't feel right to me. THIS ending popped out instead, and I think it's much better. I may be the writer but this story surprises me too.

Now we can get back to present timeline!!

This chapter was definitely more difficult than most of the other chapters, so I will take a one-week break to plan/draw the next chapter. I will upload a psd file and some high res files of some illustrations I've done in the meantime :D

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Comments

Mari

I thought there wasn’t anything left of my heart that could break after the last couple of updates. Turns out I was wrong. Waiting’s expression as he arrives and sees what’s happening, followed by that defeated slump made my chest go so tight and I just want to hold him! And then when he cries and screams I just wanted to cry 😭 And of course, that last picture of the bloodied butterfly just took the pieces of me that was left and stomped on them until there was nothing left. I also can’t help but imagine Reaper’s reaction if he remember this. His last memory will be of Waiting, someone he had decided to trust, betrayed him and got both him and his brother killed. He won’t be aware of Waiting’s actions to stop it or what he really felt and it’s killing me 😭 Another thing I want to say is that I think you’ve done a tremendous job with this flashback. I don’t think anyone has ever managed to get me feeling so much in only a few pictures and sentences. It’s really impressive! And I think one part of that is because your art style conveys so much emotion, so no matter what feelings you want the reader to have, your art can convey that really well just in itself. I don’t know if that makes sense, but I can’t really explain it in any other way. I’m just really in love with your art and the things it makes me feel 💕

surefireshore

Omg i was NOT expecting this. Oh god oh god oh god ruo yang /now i wanna know if he does or will regret it/

Ione Fung

I'm so hyped the plot is getting so exciting!!!!

orro

😭😭😭😭😭😭

silentxstorm

Oh,, damn. I was not actually entirely expecting that to happen. //.\\ Waiting is a sight here. ^^ <3 I keep thinking I haven’t seen these boys any prettier and then you drop something like this. Waiting’s pure determination and grit with no hesitation is gut wrenching and also so satisfying? It’s impossible for me to think of any other way he would have handled this. Also, the petty that resides in my dark heart is THRIVING at emotions playing out on Evil Dad’s face. I really enjoyed reading that you originally had envisioned a different scenario playing out here. It’s always really fun to see characters kind of take on a life of their own and sometimes guide their creator to something different. This has been such an emotional chapter and I must once again applaud you for your pacing on this. The delivery is heart stopping and perfect. ^v^<3