Real Person ASMR on my DAD ( need your opinions ) (Patreon)

THE VIDEO TURNS HORIZONTAL VERY SOON INTO THE VID]

its funny because it's at that point where my family have always found me so bizarre that the don't really question things like this. My dad has no idea what a ASMR is, he simply was on his phone looking at a message and I put the camera in front of him and started doing this, and he didn't even question it once, I find that quite funny. Anyways, my question is:

1- is the video too loud? I did lower/cut out some sections where my dad spoke very loudly, there's also dishes clanging in the background at some point. I dont mind loud videos sometimes, but I was wondering if it was too much.

2- I feel like the footage in the first vertical section sets the scene better but I dont want people to perhaps click off when they see a vertical format upon opening a video on YT, sometimes might be off putting for some. So I'm not sure whether to remove it completely or leave it at the end, although I would quite like to leave it in the beginning, but it does kind of look weird, I suppose [I will subtitle this all on YouTube once I get final edit and opinions]

lol I feel like im typing up some sort of Important governmental document but, I just really would like the video to be tingly :) im struggling with content at the moment, not because I can't do it, but because my personal life is getting in the way of me having time to do it., so I want the content  im managing now to at least be up to par  etc   lots of love, manga x