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The brand new Emily Lockwood adventure starts now! Emily Lockwood is beginning her new life as a secret agent! But will her first mission be her last? After months of training she's sent to a cosplay convention to find out what happened to two missing girls. To try and blend in Emily is wearing a tight fitting catsuit, but her revealing attire might get her more attention than she anticipated. If she's not careful she might just become the latest girl to be kidnapped!

She'll have to investigate the disappearance and hunt down the kidnappers, whilst trying to avoid the many dangers and perils that arise on her very first mission. You get to play as Emily, the options she chooses are entirely up to you. Take her down the wrong path and there are dozens of ways for her to become a helpless damsel in distress! This is a fresh start and a great jumping on point for any new readers! You don't have to know anything about the previous adventures to read this perilous story. All you have to do is try and lead Emily to safety. Will you be able to survive your first mission? It's time to find out!

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John Smith

Eta on island of obedience

desperadodragoon

Thank you very much for the new CYOA! I really enjoyed it. I do agree with the previous comment on the abruptness of some of the endings (I'm also not big on the explicit endings). I'd just add that a lot of the branches were really straightforward (and obvious) in that they were either "good choice or bad end" without much depth or opportunity for alternate plot progression (ex. the "Shops" branch in Chapter 2). I think it was "Coven of Lies" or even "A Fighting Chance" where it felt like there were all kinds of ways to get to the next chapter. It made it more interesting from a replayability standpoint. That said, I always love your descriptions of Emily's plights. Little things like how she "stares dizzily at the ceiling" really make the scenes shine. I also thought several endings were creative. Though it felt quick, I liked the whiskey scene. Her confrontation with "Titania" was also fun. I liked the story! Emily's insecurity about her place at the AKA made a lot of sense and it gives her something to work on in future stories. I also thought your use of flashbacks was smart to show how her relationship with Rachel evolved over time. It was a good way to present that background, as her AKA training could probably be a whole separate story of hijinks. Finally, there’s a bad link in Chapter 9. The “Rewind” link on the “TWO MONTHS EARLIER” page leads somewhere else in the story rather than a page back. Thanks again for the story. On a separate note, I keep getting internal service errors for Inklewriter (though it might just be me). Did the site finally go down?

deve

Hi there, long time lurker who just recently returned to check out the new CYOA here. I really love your work and definitely want more creators like you that put so much passion into their work. The other comments said that they don't care/ like the explicit endings, I on the other hand tho am a big fan of them and find it rather sad and boring that most endings included only being clothed and then abducted. For me it lacks the variety of this to keep me entertained. I skilled through some endings because I realized they weren't much different from the others. Especially towards the later stage of the mission there could have been a bit more "dangerous" outcomes if Emily failed to save them.