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Emily Lockwood in A Detective Never Dies - A Perilous CYOA (S2.2) (Patreon)

Published:
2020-07-04 12:04:47
Edited:
2022-04-08 21:01:56
Imported:
2026-06
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This is a Choose Your Own Adventure where you play as Emily Lockwood. Take Emily on an all new investigation where she tries to find and rescue her mom from the clutches of an evil gang of criminals. There are dozens of different unique ways for her story to end, each ending is totally different and you get to choose where Emily goes and what she does

Emily's mom has been kidnapped! After a series of misadventures Emilys vacation ended with her mom being thrown in the trunk of a car, and Emily falling from a bridge! Barely breathing, in a foreign city, with no-one coming to help her, the odds have never been more against the amateur detective. In a city controlled by the very gang she's trying to investigate, Emily will have to be more cautious than ever before. Will the skills she learnt as a sleuth in a small town be enough to save her mom in this far more dangerous environment?  It's time for Emily Lockwood to prove if she really can be a detective once and for all!

(Story attached)

To see 'What Happened Next?' in four endings from this story click here - https://www.dropbox.com/s/g1v6mgxrivwechg/2.%20A%20Detective%20Never%20Dies%20-%20What%20Happened%20Next.pdf?dl=0

Comments

eronin15

Is there a way to go back to the beginning within the browser instead of reopening the file each time you want to start over?

thelamantin

I liked it! I Chapter 1 was certainly the most enjoyable part to me, the sauna was so awesome and i loved to lose everytime. I also adored the parts where you played as Lynda, playing as a broken character was delightful and i would like to see more of that! That beingsaid i think it was weaker than the previous story. The second chapter was pretty uninteresting to me and the lack of Riko hurted a lot to me! Reo is this treatening asshole and losing to him is less engaging since you know most of the time you'll get a brutal death rather than a sensual defeat like with Riko or most of the other captors. I really hope we'll see more of Lynda and Riko in the future, they were nice addtions and i think they were underused in this story! I mean having Riko getting turned into a slave herself, Lynda spending time in jail with her daughter or Riko committing to help Emilly could have been nice! Still, it was a lot of fun! Oh also. as hot as the whole Nyx scene was, i gotta admit that it felt out of place to me. I knew her from the EG stories for the non initiated it just felt like a weird cameo, it a trope that you often see in superhero movies where a character plays no particular role, him only be there to tease a future movie where he'll be a major character. I think it makes the story weaker since you obviously know he or she wont play an important part.

spyrocyndersam13

I loved it. I haven't done all the bad endings. defeating Reo was so satisfying and I loved that we got to play as Lynda. I would've liked it if we got to see some more Riko bad endings. But I did love that she helps Emily and I hope that she returns. One thing though was this story shorter? So will the next one be Emily solving her old mysteries again? I'm excited ^^

Jack Rabbit

Hey Markus! First of all, I wanted to say thanks for this story, and for sticking to your schedule and getting it out to us. I know they're a lot of work. As for the story, it was definitely one of your best, up there with Deadly Horizons. This one even seemed a bit tighter, and the ending was obviously more satisfying. I agree with others that say that it felt like you didn't really know what to do with Riko in the story, but that's the only minor negative comment I can make. Overall, great job.