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Emily Lockwood in Halloween Horror - A Perilous CYOA (S2.4) (Patreon)

Published:
2020-10-31 20:31:13
Edited:
2022-04-08 21:04:18
Imported:
2026-06
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This is a choose your own adventure where you play as Emily Lockwood. Take Emily through a terrifying nightmare in which she has to survive Halloween while being hunted by a merciless killer. Emily's never been in more danger and it's up to you to lead her through it, if you fail there are dozens of endings each one different than the last. This is a special Halloween adventure and as such features some violent scenes, the type of which you would typically find in the horror genre.

It's Halloween! And it's a big night for Emily Lockwood. She'll be going to her very first party since returning from her perilous vacation. She doesn't know it yet but a lots changed since she's been away and going back to her old life might not be as easy as she hopes. The party is just the beginning though, someone has been waiting a long time to get their revenge on the girl detective, someone more sinister and psychotic than she's ever faced. Her most terrifying adventure yet will take her to her darkest depths, but will she able to survive the horror or will she end up as just another helpless victim? It's time to find out...

(Story Attached)

To see 'What Happened Next?' in four endings from this story click here - https://www.dropbox.com/s/n5saiuuwtqfeq5y/4.%20Halloween%20Horror%20-%20What%20Happened%20Next.pdf?dl=0

Comments

bonesteoca

Yay, it's out! And right at the perfect time!

Jack Rabbit

Thanks for posting this tonight! I've been looking forward to it. A welcome distraction after the Cyperpunk delay lol

spyrocyndersam13

I loved it! All the knockout endings were great. And while I'm not a fan of endings where Emily dies all the horror ones were unnerving. It was also nice to see how things have changed for Emily. Eliza being a good person. And of course the return of Riko! As for what I didn't like. Tommy. I REALLY find it hard to believe that he's a good guy now. He was the only one who wasn't tricked or threatened by Diana. He happily did those things. Not to mention how he saw and treated women for years. And he never once showed remorse for his actions. And he's supposed to have changed in a few months? Also I REALLY don't like Emily dating him. especially since he tried to kill her several times As for the ending. Things are pretty bad for Emily though not so bad since she has Riko. Also it was nice seeing her mom again. I'm excited for the next one ^^

Jack Rabbit

I don't know if anyone else has noticed the same problem, but I haven't been able to open any Twine-created stories (including this one) in Firefox since a recent update (versions 81 & 82). It works fine in other browsers though. I'm hoping it's something that Firefox will fix in a later update.

thelamantin

An interesting sequel but i think it went kinda all over the place in a way. The introduction was so great, each endings being more delightful than the last. But then it goes to a much more darker tone, making me avoid every ending possible because those violent resolutions werent exactly my thing. You also introduced many charaters, Emily's friends, rivals, Eliza, Jason and Stacy and it just didnt exactly went anywhere with them. Tommy was fine in this story but i feel him now being a good guy just felt so odd. It felt like you pulled a "13 reasons why season 3" twist and...eh. Last part with Riko was delightful andi wish she could be the main focus of a story one day because her endings, behavior, personnality are all perfect to me. It led to a nice clifthanger for sure. But the whole story was built up around this spooky serial killer and then...Riko's here. It had little to no connection to the overall narrative, even if it was indeed the best part. So hit and miss to me. Great opening and finale, but the overall story wasnt exactly cohesive nor were all the characters meaningful. Here's hoping Lynda and Riko and Eliza get more screen time in the future! By the way i still had a blast reading it despite everything!

Jack Rabbit

Now that I've finally had a chance to finish it, let me say great story. I think it's definiltely one of your best. It started off slowly, but everything after they got to the island was entertaining. I like that it was a little more serious than most of your other stories, and I liked that you changed the narrative structure up a bit. I also thought the use of code around when Emily hit her head was very creative. It definitely threw me off at first. I wasn't super thrilled with her being accepting of Tommy, since that seems pretty unrealistic given the circumstances, but I guess I'll just have to see where it goes. Overall great job and keep it up! I do have one question though: do you happen to know the approximate word count of this story? I only ask because I'm working on a CYOA of my own and I'm curious for reference.