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Rough Shower (Patreon)

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2020-01-02 14:39:27
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Veronique being the new girl, has to addapt on being around others in this Rugby team.

Susan isn't the easiest person to deal with on any given day and with Veronique sticking out like this, is bound to head for some trouble.

As shown in the sketch version, the earlier draft differs at the plot and tall Marjolein's  involvement in this fight.
I felt this way would be more realistic as the new one in a group is up against the rest in the start. Plus this way I was able to get a suitable joke out at the end.

Of course this whole scene gave a great oportunity to glance at Marjolein's ass during all this... XD
Something I plan on using more often as a "Running gag".
The fact that she at nearly 2 meters tall, towers over the other much smaller girls brings an interesting perspective to shower scenes.

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Michael

Wow, Susan is a real bitch isn't she? Though I guess Veronique has a bad attitude too at times, something like this was bound to happen eventually. Still that's one nasty shiner...

Joe Schmoe

Dang, what is their freakin' problem? XD

GundamSamuraiAkira

Oooh there's a couple booties in there that need to be reared properly.

PieterAntonissen
>>30703454

Maybe this is a Dutch state of mind, but in the Netherlands one best behave like the others and "Fit in" not make themselves stand out or they will be tought a lesson. The phrase - Dont get your head above the cornfield or it gets cut off - aplies here. Plus its the classical picking on the new kid... Dont worry I have the follow up in line. ; ))

Joe Schmoe
>>30703454

Well, the pressure to fit in applies everywhere, but within that, I'd kinda thought eastern cultures tended to be rather more conformist in that sense than most western ones. It'd be interesting to hear if Dutch are perceived to be more conformist than Americans, which isn't something I've heard of before.

PieterAntonissen
>>30703454

Its not so much as being conformists. Dutch are really tolerant, but at the same time crave for everyone to behave normally. Big succesful celebs for example still have to behave themselves like average or be frowned upon and severely disliked if they feel they deserve priveledges. This can be contradicting at times. So for example here in the showers ALL girls are naked, thus Veronique HAS to be too or get commented on in the direct Dutch way. Another example about not-to-stick-out I can give was - at school I made the test and wrote the correct answer, but the teacher still failed me because I had written the answer with a blue pen and not a black pencil like the others had. Not that this was said beforehand and the answer was not wrong - but he treathed it as wrong nevertheless just for me using a differnt pen... To him I should have done just like everyone else had done. That said, the man was a huge asshole, so perhaps its not that good of a general example. Dutch can be very tolerant and also very nit-picky at the same time. Mostly they are extremely tolerant about the large issues and very fussy about the small things in life. At 4:40: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=I8cmUtVrJ70

Joe Schmoe
>>30703454

Holy hell. If that jerk had been my teacher.... I was a pretty shy, quiet kid, but I think that would have broken me. Just too outrageous.

PieterAntonissen
>>30703454

Indeed! Closest I ever came to punshing a teacher. Some fellow students interveined and kept me from hitting him. If I had punched the man I probably had been kicked off that college and would not have found antoher one. Too complicated to explain in short, but knowing they had this position, most teachers were assholes to the students just to bait them and able to kick them off the school. They had too much power due to being one of only two colleges in the country for becoming advertisement agenties. Not sure if Iam explaining this very clearly. But since they had such a HUGE ammount of students needing that school - they could behave like assholes and get away with it. They did really nasty stuff there, eventually I managed to report the worst corrupted ones to the National School Inspection. That is how I managed to gain my diploma. Well that was over 25 years ago anyway...