Chapter 23, Page 15 Layout Sketch (Patreon)

We can see a few alternate panels here. Originally, we had a close-up of Siyo on Panel 3--but we felt it was more important to see Mora's indifferent response. Also, we decided to not show Mora eating the grape in Panel 5. Picking one out of the cup seemed more calculating/methodical than just popping it into her mouth right away. Sometimes, it's the little details :)