Chapter 24, Page 21 Layout Sketch (Patreon)

We went through a lot of changes on Page 21, which is why we're missing a few panels here.

Panels 1 and 2 stayed consistent from the start, but we decided close-ups of Trey worked better for Panels 3 and 4, then wrapped with Belanie in Panel 5 for a more 'cliffhanger' feel.