Chapter 24, Page 24 Layout Sketch (Patreon)

We went through many versions of this page to get it 'just right.' As can be seen above, we started with several alternate angles for Panel 3. The angle behind Yalee felt more dynamic (instead of the side shot), but it meant we'd miss out on the foot making contact and Yalee's expression...

Ultimately, we decided to add two extra panels so we could fit everything in, despite our original intent of making this page with only three panels.

I'm extremely happy with how the final version turned out. Salaiix took the best elements from each concept and combined them to make the definitive page.