Chapter 16, Page 10 Layout Sketch (Patreon)

Not too different from the final page, aside from the last panel. We had two ideas for Panel 4 -- either a close-up of Madison, injured -- or a wider shot to showcase the city-wide destruction. 

Ultimately, we decided on the wide angle, to give the scene a larger sense of scale. While the tighter shot would have been a great depiction of Madison's reaction, we felt that seeing the aftermath of the air strike was, visually, more impactful.