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Animation Draft - Feedback Needed / Progress = 30% (+3%) (Patreon)

Published:
2018-10-05 15:49:21
Imported:
2026-06
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Animation Draft - Feedback Needed / Progress = 30% (+3%)

  • This camera angle is great! Keep it! 26
  • Show the cum shooting out from Bella's POV instead :D Cause thats hot 27
  • Render 1 camera angle (Chose above) 8
  • Render 2 camera angles, cum shooting out & cum landing on Bella 64
  • Movement looks good! 18
  • Movement needs work, read my comments below, NOW! 2
  • fap fap fap 23
  • 2018-10-05
  • 168 votes
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Content

LINK TO PREVIEW: https://www.dropbox.com/s/ztfo60ojjbizhqf/Scene14.mp4?dl=0

This is just a DRAFT but I wanted to get some opinions on a couple things. The camera angle I am using will focus on the cum shooting out of Maggie. However, I am thinking of re-rendering the same scene from another angle to show the splatter on Bella's face. Would you like to see both? Or just one? The other thought I had was showing the cum shooting out of Maggie from Bella's POV. 

My original idea is to focus on Maggie's ass then in the next scene show Bella's face, with cum all over it, and her scooping it up and maybe leaning forward to clean up Maggies ass and pussy a little.

Couple of additional notes:

The "easiest/fastest" thing would be to just do Bella's POV followed up by the "aftermath". The reason is because when I do the cum shooting simulation, I will not have to make Bella's face a collision object. This alone will probably save 1-2 days of simulation time.

The "hardest/longest" thing to do would be to render 2 camera angles. 1 showing the cum shooting out and 1 showing the cum landing on Bella's face. This would require double the rendering and double/triple the simulation time.

Also, I am not 100% confident in how the movement looks in this section. What do you think? Does everything look ok or should I change/add something?

AML4 - Animation Progress = 30% (+3%), Rendering = 16% (+0% POV Scene almost done rendering!!!)

40-530-(NeedRender)Intro

Scene1=(Done)Mary,pleasesaysomething

Scene2=(Done)Maryisfrustrated

Scene3=(Done)Bellasfirsttime

Scene4=(Done)CuttoMaggiesreaction

Scene5=(Done)Maryisntevenhard

Scene6=(Done)Bellapleads

Scene7=(Done)Maggiecanhelp!

Scene8=(Done)Goodidea!

Scene9=(Done)Marygettingwarmedup(Draft)

Scene10=(Done)Asseating1

1500-1700=(STILLRenderingOMG)AsseatingPOV

1800-2100=(NeedRender)AsseatingfromMary'sPOV

2070-2195=(NeedRender)BellatellsMaggietopushthecumout

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UpNext:Maggieawkwardlydeclaresshehastopee

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UpNext:Peeonmyface...:(

UpNext:Maggiewtf?

UpNext:Bellapornstarpeerequest!

UpNext:MaggieOK!

UpNext:Maggietryingtopee

UpNext:Bellagiveittome

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UpNext:Kissing+CockSnoodling

UpNext:BellacumsonMaggiescock

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UpNext:MaryfacefuckingMaggie(IwilladdmorewhenIgetclosertothissection)

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Comments

Agent Red Girl

Sorry if this poll is a little confusing in anyway. My brain is a little fried. Lemme know if you have any questions!

Erica

I think the angle shown is mostly ok, but if the angle was down and to the right just a little bit, and a little wider of a shot, it would come across better imo. IDK if that's exactly what kind of feedback you wanted but those are my thoughts.

Ciarán

Although it would take longer, I do really like the idea of having 2 camera angles, getting to see the cum shooting out as well as getting a full view of how it lands and splashes across Bella's face, the second angle being the extra sexy one for me personally 😍😍😍. As for this animation preview, it looks good to me, I like the way Maggie's body raises and lowers with her back arching as she does so, while the way her asshole opens and closes looks right.

Futanari Fan

Hi Red, I've gone for rendering 2 camera angles. I know this will take more time but worth the effort and the wait I think. Is it possible to do split screen so we see both angles simultaneously. WHat ever you go for no doubt it will look great!

glrider

I'd recommend 2 cameras, but with a bit of a compromise. Have the first spurt or two as shown in the example, but then switch camera angles for the remaining spurt to show it landing on Bella. But then... the big question will be, what will Bella's reaction be? One of discust? One of erotic pleasure? Will she wipe her face and eat it? That's where the second angle continues the story.

bigwiggy

I think 2 camera angles would be worth the time & effort. The movement looks good to me, the only thing I'd suggest adding is that every time Maggie pushes grool and semen should be leaking from her pussy & cock respectively. Maybe you could even use that as a lead up to Bella cleaning Maggie up as Bella would lower her head and catch a long rope of grool or semen in her mouth and sort of slurp it up as she follows it back to it's source? Anyway just an idea.