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Animation Preview - Intro - The Triangle (Rough Draft) (Patreon)

Published:
2019-01-29 22:25:49
Edited:
2019-02-19 19:24:30
Imported:
2026-06
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Heya all. Here is a rough draft of the intro for   All My Roomates Love 4.5 =) If you are new please know I always welcome feedback and would love to hear your ideas on how to improve any section. So if you see something that doesn't look right or you have an idea on how to improve a scene, please let me know!

I still have a few details to add... and I think I may add some precum hanging below Mary's cock but lemme know what you think.

Direct Link: https://www.dropbox.com/s/h1c22kozglklijf/Scene1.mp4?dl=0

The idea here is Bella and Maggie are kinda glowing from just having had sex and Mary gets a little annoyed that the girls are getting along so well.

  All My Roomates Love 4.5 - Animation 7% Completed

200-600- The Triangle

Scene 1 - Mary,"Bella, go ahead and get dinner started"

Scene 2 - Bella,"But Mary..."

Scene 3 - Mary,"I said now Bella."

Scene 4 - Bella,"Yes Mary (sad walk)

Scene 5 - Mary,"Sweetie, open up for mommies cock"

Scene 6 - Maggie,"OK!" + Maggie getting into position

Scene 7 - Mary starts pushing her cock into Maggie's mouth

More to come, will update when I get closer to this part.

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Scene1.mp4

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Comments

Agent Red Girl

*need to fix Mary's hand movements toward the end... looks too robotic

Ciarán

Well first things first, this is a pretty long preview! And it's already come quite a long way with shadows defining the forms of the characters very well, clearly the new engine is working out very well for you! 😸 As for the scene here, I like it a lot, I love how in the first few seconds as we look up at Maggie she casts a cheeky little glance at Bella's cock before the camera then cuts to looking at Bella who looks absolutely adorable here with her shoulders slanted and hands behind her back. I also like how we linger on looking at Bella for a few seconds, just basking in how the girls smile at one another, "glowing" as you described it. The framing of when we then change scenes again is really nice with Maggie and Bella on either side and Mary at the centre, it nicely puts Mary in focus and lets us see her reactions as she looks back and forth between Maggie and Bella. I have to say that Maggie looks utterly adorable when she notices Bella getting hard again and starts to smile as she rests on her hands and of course, Bella's cock rising slowly before sharply pulsing at the end, going rigid with her balls riding high is so sexy! I do like the transition too with Mary from being pleasantly aroused and stroking herself at a good pace to growing annoyed and slowing down her stroking as she glares at Bella. I think you've done a great job on this intro preview and seeing the quality already of this scene has me excited to see even more previews as they come 😸. Oh and I realise that most of the time my comments don't really have suggestions and I'm just praising what's already here but honestly, I don't really see anything that I would change at this point. I hope that the kind of feedback that I give is still useful despite not really suggesting any alterations (like I said, I don't think this scene needs any).

Joseph Moore

Everything that Ciaran said! The facial expressions are on point and portray exactly the subtle emotion that is intended. I absolutely love how Bella's scrotum also scoots up when her cock pulses. It adds a sense of realism. One thing I did notice, though, was Maggie's neck. The weird folds make it look like she has a turtle's neck. Not sure what's causing it, but smoothing that out would make it look way more natural! Otherwise, holy crap I'm really looking forward to the release of 4.5 and then 5 where I'm guessing we'll be getting a Mary hands free cumshot? Maybe? Yes? Please? :D

bobby stronzheim

No criticisms here Red, keep up your current though process, I am confident everyone else feels the same :). +1 to the scrotum tightening and expressions. I think you could add some precum to Bella to show off how much her exhibitionist side is in full force? Until next time!

Dildo Faggins

everything is lookin good if a say so my self