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Heya all. OK so this is a very rough draft of this scene... I have the bulk of the primary motion done but I have been working on details all day. So BE WARNED this is a very rough draft and probably doesnt look super great. I wouldnt watch it unless you want to provide some general feedback on whats going on =P

Dropbox: https://www.dropbox.com/s/y50oik5so0mc5f2/Scene11Rough.mp4?dl=0

Google Drive: https://drive.google.com/open?id=1gcv77GuOCjeTtdNnjYF8U2WcZ3JalQdC

So, here are some of my notes on what I am still working on:

Dynamics (boobs/balls/hair obviously)

Fix Maggies left arm around 3 seconds

Fix Maggies right arm around 4 seconds

Fix Marys cock "flexing" make it lower and not hit herself in the chest (though I really liked the idea of her cock hitting herself in the chest)

Add in Mary's lip sync motions.

Comments

Ciarán

Well, the "primary motion" as you call it looks great, I really like the angle we're viewing them from, while the motion of Mary's thrusting combined with how she's grasping Maggie's head, holding her in place while she thrusts so firmly looks fantastic and very sexy! I also like the idea of Mary's cock flexing as she stands there, still very much aroused even as she asks how Maggie is doing. As for providing other kinds of feedback, you already have a list of fixes that you plan to make so I don't really have anything to add there 😅. Perhaps there'll be more to say once the scene is further updated. Regardless, this looks very good so far and I just love Mary's thrusting! 😻😻😻 Great work! 👏👏👏

Cwolf

Please keep Mary's cock hitting her chest! And have it make a deep meaty *thud* sound. :3

The Dude

Honestly The chest slap is great.

DrJonesToYou

This is incredibly good. I don't think you appreciate your own talents. Keep the cock hitting the tits.

Joseph Moore

I'm with you on liking the fact that Mary's cock hits her chest as it flexes! Just make sure it doesn't clip through parts of her body.

Agent Red Girl

Ok I guess I will keep the smack against her chest lol =P

SB

I say this with no idea how tricky it would be to do but when Mary’s cock flexes up to her chest it would be super horny if it could stay there for a second or two whilst she squeezes her tits around it before it goes back into Maggie’s mouth.