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kurogetsui

Aaaand there went half the universe... Only they're mannequins now instead of dust ;)

Mike K

The poor shopkeeper is going to start looking for a nice quiet location.....

clancy688

I'm wondering how powerful Darcy is in comparison to Elsie and Tara... she doesn't seem to regard this as a dangerous situation. And this is even more impressive given that she was a normal human guy only a few months/years ago... ^^

Asani

She's had quite the onboarding process and accelerated training with our Demon Queen.

Marissa

She didn’t leave a trial? I believe you mean trail. Also just a simple criticism sometimes it is hard to figure out which word bubble to read first. If possible please structure them so that we can read from left to right. Happy to see the mannequin again!

Mike K

Tara is still there....but Karl is missing!

Kai Lee

I love how insanely skilled Darby is as both a witch and a sleuth!! Don’t mess with Darby!! Feel bad for that poor shopgirl though... It has NOT been her week.

Asani

Now I'm imagining Darby "borrowing" one of the whips DQ surely has laying around, lacing up a black corset, and going out Mistress'ing in the night.

CaptainHarlock

Realized I didn't address your second point... I do struggle with the left to right thing for the dialogue. Sometimes I forget, other times the image just looked better the way the end result looked. If I can't get the dialogue going from left to right I do have it read in order from up to down. Thank you for the feedback!!

Senseiwoo

Awww the poor store clerk!