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Senseiwoo

Lol. Reminds me of a scene (I forgot where) where there’s a big duel about to commence and one just tackles and ground and pounds the other into submission.

Dollmistress

Maybe she is immune to fire after being stoned for so long. Also, don't forget to use random dialogue (like the villain gloating in this scene) as opportunities to add more characterisation. Even if he's going to lose, it's more engaging to give him fun and characterful things to say.