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Coven War 12 (Patreon)

Published:
2022-06-13 12:01:03
Edited:
2022-06-13 23:01:57
Imported:
2026-06
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And the final page!

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Blue06

Unaware clothing tf is awesome!

Sean McDermott

I wonder if this cocky witch will have met her match when it comes to Tara... Or... Will Tara be caught unawares.

Mike K

Hopefully Tara has gotten Karl(a) out of the luggage by now!

Dollmistress

Heya Harlock - a quick suggestion for that first panel. At the moment, all three of the Witches' sentences start with "Now", which looks odd. Also, you're a bit pressed for space on the middle line, so it would actually help if you got rid of the "now" in the middle sentence. I suggest you keep the "now" in the first sentence, omit the second instance completely, and then replace the third one with "Hmm, "

Dollmistress

What happens if a witch transforms a rival into clothing, wears that clothing, then herself is also transformed into clothing? The clothes all seem to get bundled together with the witch when she is transformed (like, they don't fall to the ground and get left behind, etc), so does that mean it's possible to end up with "nested witches"? How deep can the nesting go? Could you end up with an item of clothing 'containing' ten witches? Or one hundred? Or even more? Do nested witches stay separated or are their souls/consciousness all smooshed together into a witchy paste? O.o

Dollmistress

Forget the heels, what that dress in the second panel desperately needs is a nice broad belt. Something with a big showy buckle and long attachments hanging down from the front to break up the unflattering 'X' shape. Preferably something with diamonds. Right now the dress looks like a baggy bin liner or backwards hospital gown - it needs a centerpiece to avert a fashion disaster. XD

matioux

can't wait to see the next chapter!