first draft february no4: 'deep end' (Patreon)

HEY! so I like the vibe here but I couldn't crack the chorus.. oh well. I'll return to it for sure. I'm enjoying the quick fire aspect of this challenge.. I've been trying to move on from an idea before I work too hard on it & start to overthink! so in that spirit, here u go!

I didn’t even cry

when you told me I 

didn’t make you feel anything anymore

you were on my side 

but never on my mind

life is too short, why we tryna force it 

I heard it from my best friend 

on the weekend

she told me what you did to that other girl

and it sounds like you just dove off 

the deep end

i was kinda glad it wasn’t me