first draft february no8: 'more like you' (Patreon)

hey! we back on track. here's my 'first draft february' idea no.8! the super attentive among you might recognise this chorus from a previous insta snippet / bonus demo.. I didn't like the verses, so this is me having a go at re-writing them. as always, feedback welcome! 

can I ask you a personal question?

does your face light up when she walks in a room?

she’s a name that I can’t even mention

and I got this feeling, that she’s funnier than me

the other night I was stuck on a photo

with the skin so good I got locked in the zoom

you’re with her now thinking where did the time go? the time go

and look

it’s true, true, true, true

I got these insecurities 

they’re all mine

there’s nothing you can 

do, do, do, do

oohhhhhh

I heard it from a woman on the internet 

she told me to eat well and try to love myself

then maybe I won’t wish that I was someone else 

tell me how 

oh I know that I’ve been flirting with the enemy 

but please don’t be so perfect right in front of me

I think of all the things that I will never be 

tell me how 

to be more like you