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Today I was thinking about how the focus of Nights in Ludos is slower and more romance based than my usual work, so I figured I'd make a poll to see how you feel about it so far.


Please do explain your choice and give me all the feedback you like!

Comments

Kirk98#2

I like it, love the story. however it could be a bit more lewd. Maybe add some hidden sexy details in each strip to curb us over until the stories lewd portions?

Ross Kirkland

I like it. the story so far has been fun and hot and I can see lots of potential for it moving forward.

Tyler L Jewell

I love it. Pure sex and shit is fine sometimes but when there is more i find that it makes me feel hornier

Anonymous

I enjoy it however not super invested

NovaS

I choose i like it, it started fast and now it's a bit calm which is not a bad thing. I think in term of flow the story overall is nice, now my only concern is where this will go? Because idk i'm starting losing interest that at this point i will just wait for the last page to read the whole thing. Don't get me wrong the story is interesting but some page feels like a filler episode of an anime that's all Edit: also wanted to add, seeing the comments after me, i've realised think the same thing, that if it goes to a corruption route then so far it's good, if not then it's good for those who are fans of romantic stories

Anonymous

I think it’s a very nice aside to your usual work, personally I think the idea of a slow-burn romantic story is quite appealing, especially when it has bursts of the usual debauchery like with that alleyway blowjob scene in part one, plus if it is going down the corruption path I think that really fits with the general theme of your previous works, if not that’s fine too. I think the relationship between the two characters is really cute, and cuteness mixed with degeneracy is always fun. I’ve always wanted to see a story based work from you and this totally scratches that itch. Keep up the great work Alba! Oh and I said that I love it! I also wouldn’t mind each page being a bit wordier, more dialog between characters or with an internal dialog would make the pages feel a lot denser. Also maybe a roadmap of sorts would get people more into it and allow you to bounce ideas off the community, idk how long you plan to make this but having an idea of what future pages might hold would certainly get at least me more invested than I already am, which is already sizable. Anywho, those are my thoughts.

GooPop

I'm not sure how to vote because I feel indifferent, everyone has their preferences and to each their own. But for me all like busy curvy girls that don't have dicks so while the shy girl is cute she isn't busty and unfortunately the hot busty girl has a dick instead if a pussy. Again nothing wrong with people's preferences and now power to them for embracing what they like, in simply saying my preferences are different therefore its a mixed bag of non excitement. If you ever have a story of a well busted woman with regular equipment I know I'll receive it better.

Anonymous

I like it because when there's context to a relationship, it makes the sex scenes more impactful and erotic. Plus it's something different from your norm, so that makes it interesting automatically, to me at least.

Mr. Gabit

I feel like it has incredibly slow pacing so far and I have lost interest in it since it has taken so long to get juicy. At this point I am not entirely sure what the comic is trying to be.

Sendahlove

Honestly everything you are doing is great. Unlike most here I do love the slow pacing because it adds tremendous amount of depth in characterization. It feels more natural to see the communication between a shy person and someone who is very open-minded and willing to express themselves candidly. So my advice is to keep doing what you are doing, let the story come to you naturally as opposed to forcing it to appease the impatience. I think it will be much more rewarding experience when we feel like Ashley and Hazel are more relatable to the reader and feel like real people with kinks. Lastly I would like to see a larger and more diverse cast of characters (including different kinks).

MrSkeltal

I think it's moving at just the right pace if the point is to tell a story of corruption and descent into depravity. If it winds up being a 100+ page comic companion to Bubblegum Sunday, I'll be thrilled

Cryphius

I love how cute and "wholesome" it is, and that it's a legit story.

CocoaNoir

I love it, I appreciate a slow burn and cute characters

Anonymous

11/10 would bang:P

Mr. Gabit

All I'm saying is that if I was looking for deep character development and realism I'd pick up some Dostoevsky. What I love from Alba is sexy ladies, corruption, and lewdness.

Mr. Gabit

Don't get me wrong, it has lots of potential and I am curious to see where it goes once it picks up, but I see no reason to drag it out too long.

Anonymous

I like your cute and sexy characters, the backgroundstory and the romance part with it. I love how Hazel is looking in her bimboish dickgirl way and slowly but surly corrupting Ash. A nice long, slwo story with more text is hightly appreciated. You are doing amazing work and art. Thanks a lot Alba ❤❤❤

Anonymous

I like it! I like the change of pace, 'cause I'm not a huge fan of all lewd all the time.