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Nights in Ludos [Page 70] (Patreon)

Published:
2021-12-17 16:49:04
Edited:
2021-12-17 16:51:54
Imported:
2026-06
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I redid the dialogue for this one like 4 times... :x

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Mika W

So she is basically trading Ash for herself? That is so deliciously evil. I wonder what will become of naive little Ash now. I hope she becomes really nasty ....

jf

UH OHHHHH~! This is *very* interesting!

Matthew

Ooo interesting … I can’t wait to see more of this story and she the lady behind the curtain

Jamie May

I’m so invested in this story

ImpulseCrypt

This blew my mind, I have no idea where this is going 🤯

Vitalis

Curious where this goes.

Tom Friendo

Hang on isn’t that the ex boyfriend

Testcase

This ruined the story.

Northug

Sorry, feels like you trying to bring story in two different directions. One is just corruption theme, pretty usual to you, and another putted right up on the first, is to bring some emotional attachments to character, wich is exact opposite. Hope you know what you doing.

albatrossart

You're actually right. Up until this point NIL has been a very simple and straightforward story. But the longer this becomes, the more I want to explore an actual storyline with depth to my characters. I'm not sure if I know what I'm doing, I'm just challenging myself to try something new. If you're worried the corruption is going away, don't be! I'm very aware this is a pornographic comic first, and I'm keeping that in mind when I write. I hope I wont dissappoint anyone that read this page and is worried. It's definitely a turning point, but I think it's for the better!

albatrossart (edited)

Comment edits

2026-10-06 22:00 Sorry you feel that way, but please keep an open mind <3
2021-12-17 22:36 Sorry you feel that way, but please keep an open mind <3

Sorry you feel that way, but please keep an open mind <3

albatrossart

Yay! I've got a lot planned and it develops further in my head every day!

Jamie May

If more soap opera were like this I would watch them lol. I hope ash doesn’t permanently stay upset at hazel if things go bad 🥺

Northug

Ok, I only hope it's not just a spontaneous decision and you have a full vision of the outcome that you want, without breaking viewers and yours expectations. Thank for the explanation to me, wish you the best

Mika W

Will we learn about Hazels past too? Or just Ashs Future? Or are they the same? I can't wait to see how this will continue.

albatrossart

You're welcome! I will try my absolute best to keep this comic as fun as it has been, just with a more interesting plot :D

poppy101

where is this going?

Desmond

Oh nooooo

FranklyHam

I wonder if Hazel could... idk. Turn the tides maybe. I'm sure a nice sissy would be a good trade

Vendura

How? 🤔