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There's been some slight changes to Chapter 26 after misstep was pointed out to me, revising the section just before the ending paragraph. I'll keep an eye out for that kind of mistake in the future.

E.E.

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Michael Meikle

I think the rewrite was wise. The first version was very well-written, but it's too skeevy to have the concern of brainfuckery before a sex scene.

thephilosoft

Judging by comments from previous post. I believe "community" is too sensitive for life in general and overreacting beyond any reasonable limit Maybe there are also people who are not pleased with skin color of characters? Or maybe sexual preferences aren't diverse enough? Or maybe Guardia was too heavy handed? .........

Markus

I second this. I don't think that chapter 26 was overreaching or implying anything that should have been rewritten. Besides I liked the older paragraph more! But that is my subjective opinion.

Markus

BTW on that note. Thank you big time for all your hard work, you are amazing and I love your story's EE! <3