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P35 will be the first time I reference a pros*ate in a piece of artwork. Yippie!

I'm not really sure about the "Gotta push you more lose" line on P35. Like, the meaning is definitely what I want him to say, but I know there should be a better way of saying it. It just feels like my English is off there.

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SuchLou

LOVE THIS! You might have more luck with "gotta stretch you looser" or "gotta fuck you looser" or just "gotta make you looser" - main point is, looser is grammatically correct while "more loose" is not! Man I'm loving these pages, tysm <3

UndoTheory

Let's stretch this cute otters pocket~

Kadorath

Or something like "gotta loosen you up". I feel like I don't often see the word 'looser' at the end of a sentence, even though it's correct

SuchLou

Yes!! This one's more natural than my suggestions lol

Teabro

Loving this sm!

Stomak

oh helll yeaaaaah, so exciting, its goin in! also some suggestions, if you wanted to keep the same words, you could correct "lose" to "loose" aka "gotta push you more loose" or a phrase that sounds better "gotta loosen you up" or "gotta stretch you out" "gotta loosen you up" sound more natural and more grammatically correct