Galaxy Hunter Online Chapter 150: Tutorial Assessment (Patreon)

Hey Guys,

This is the last Chapter of the Tutorial. That is right, another book is done. I have finished about six since the start of the year. Now, I would really like feedback on this chapter, as it was an extremely hard chapter. I would like to know if you thought I did not include enough information or what you think about everything in this chapter, as it is so critical. I hope you all enjoy it, though.

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1R9xgMKl5FBhaFe3Q4Qt9P0xi8SYZhlJ652Hw-ViuTYg/edit?usp=sharing