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Naughty Lyanna - Rewards and Relevant Links Guide (Patreon)

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2024-01-06 08:41:13
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Hey guys, how are you?

From this month onwards, rewards will be distributed on the most recent post in the respective category.

This post is a guide to direct you to those monthly posts, where you'll find:

  • A link to the current month's reward.

  • A link to a folder containing all rewards from previous months.

If you have any questions, just ask and I'll be happy to help!

See ya!

Rewards Posts:

Lastest Public Releases:

  • Season 1 (v1.08): Link

  • Season 2 (v0.27): Link

Lastest Update:

  • Season 2 (v0.28): Link

Files

Previews only

Comments

Frank Baum

Hmmm....I played season 1 and liked it a lot. So far, Season 2 doesn't live up to Season 1 at all. In Season 1, the payer could really focus on having the MC engage with males or females. In Season 2 it comes mixed up. But what is worse: In Season 2 the story keeps on jumping from character to character. It seems to always jump out when it gets interesting: every time when I think there will be some female on female action, the story cuts and jumps to a different character and we go back to bla-bla instead of the interesting part. Is this getting better after the start of Season 2 or was it a deliberate decision to move away from erotic content?

dwrgames
>>128125443

In Season 2 I decided to expand the scene possibilities and give more depth to the other characters, but the story continues to revolve around Lyanna, as she is the link that connects all these girls in some way. This was my choice, as something that could keep me motivated to write, since I like to think that players will actually get to know these characters, see how they think, and become attached to them. I understand that this slows down the plot's evolution. As for the sex scenes, I don't know if you've reached the end of the current version of Season 2 yet (0.18 as I'm writing this), but the number of sex scenes so far is more than double that of Season 1.

Frank Baum
>>128125443

Hi there! I understand your motivation and what you are trying to do. I fully respect that. You are the creator of this wonderful world and you can let the story go wherever you want it to go. I would like to share my experience with both Season 1 and Season 2 so far. What I liked about Season 1 was that it had a story that escalated. First, Lyanna got more and more lewd with her actions, then other characters were introduced, and their level of lewdness increased – leading to plenty of lesbian action. This escalation throughout the story gave the story an arch that was easy to follow and kept me hooked as to “what will happen next?”. It was an erotic story arch. Second, the player had many choices to follow female-female content or go for male-female content. I liked that a lot as I am a lover of female-female content, but I understand that others may have a different taste. To offer options for the players in this respect is great. That is what I liked the most about Season 1. And quite frankly that is why Season 1 was one of the best visual novels that I ever came across. Having played Season 2 to its current conclusion, my impression is that it is a bit confusing. The story arch is hard to find, and the visual novel lost its focus on erotic content and erotic escalation. I do understand that you want to present the story from different angles, and you have explained why. At the same time, you are bringing in flash-backs and changes in realities (putting some characters into the gaming world). Now you are changing the perspective from which I should look at the story a lot. As the reader I have to take on different views to look at the same story (and to find the main story). I have to follow different threads. The jumps in perspective (the different threads) are hard to follow because I cannot understand why they happen (basically: why do we leave a thread to jump to the next thread?). You are doing a great job pointing out the jumps but as a reader I also have to understand why we are looking at it from a different perspective. As a reader I am looking for a main plot (an escalation) to follow that will keep me hooked and it takes a lot of effort to find that. There is a lot of conversations going on to explain each perspective and each thread. This leads to the perception that each thread contains very little erotic content (again the perception of erotic content relative to the story telling and the “jumping-around perspectives”). Many threads don’t have any erotic content at all (that is fine if it doesn’t happen too much) but many others are ending just as things are getting spicy or interesting. Erotic scenes are not played out fully. For example the scene in the hospital room where the girls were just starting to get erotic. The scene is cut-off. Likewise, the scene in the MMA ring where there were many girls starting to fondle with one girl. The scene was cut short. That leads to the impression that I got strung along for something erotic to happen just to be cut off when it starts or for it not to happen at all. The erotic escalation is what strings me along and it falls flat. (instead of getting to look at the “interesting stuff” you ask me to follow a different thread or you tell me there was nothing to see anyway). So, it would be great to be mindful about the “jumps” in perspective and have some sort of erotic escalation for the reader. Maybe add more erotic endings to the threads and allow the erotic content to play out fully rather than cut it off. Also, maybe consider more group sex content (more FFF, FFFF or even FFFFF situations to develop). You have built a story where lots of girls are getting nude together, let it play out erotically….Maybe the story could have the exhibitionist aspect leading to more erotic content (you had a great scene in Season 1 where you let Layanne finger another girl under a table while they were hiding from somebody – more like this, maybe with more than 2 girls at a time or the girls chasing each other, could be such an escalation. The MMA story was very intriguing until it was cut-off). That would make the story much more spicy. I hope it was understandable and I hope that you could consider it. In closing, I think your work is great! You put in an enormous effort for all the different renderings with so many different renderings for a single conversation reflecting the mood of the character and a lot of detail. That is all fantastic. I hope you see my comments as constructive. Thank you!

dwrgames
>>128125443

Hey, thanks so much for the comments. And yes, they are absolutely constructive and I can understand your points. I'm aware that sometimes I make the character building and the expectation of the scene reach a point and cut the climax. Maybe it's an addiction to creating the tease and a failure to execute the result of it. This is something I've been trying to improve in my recent updates. You may notice that the scenes have culminated into longer and more complex erotic scenes. Now, about plot and development, I'll try to summarize: a) In Season 1, I had the entire plot in my head before I even started the story, and that certainly helped me keep the thread. b) In Season 2, I had a plot idea, involving a politician, and somehow I should involve his ambitions with girls. He is part of the same group of villains from Season 1 and little by little his actions would somehow affect the girls and those around them, and this would cause them to get into trouble. But as I decided to add the element of perspective changes, and to build each character well and expand their motivations, I created a series of subplots and the game became more of a slice of life, with the main plot moving slowly, almost as in transitions. It's a drastically different feature from Season 1. And as you say, as I like to render each render in a dialogue, in a very detailed way, I end up spending more effort on an update in which the plot evolves less than it did in Season 1. But it's a price I'm willing to pay to maintain the depth of my characters. Like I said, I want you to remember them by name, know how they think, what they like, what they don't like, etc. Finally, I like to say that I've reached a point in the story where all the cards are on the table, so now I can develop the main plot further from now on. And I have the expectation that as a final product, things in season 2 will make more sense.

dwrgames
>>128125443

And just to be clear, as a new writer, this type of perception that you give me as a reader is absolutely important so that I can reflect and also try to capture points to improve my writing. And for that, I truly thank you.

Frank Baum
>>128125443

I don't really have a way to notice how Season 2 developed from release to release, since I only got it recently and just saw the current release in one go. But I am glad that you are aware of the challenges that the perspective changes bring with them. When it comes to the point of building up tension without going through an erotic climax. That is an interesting aspect to build overall tension - if eventually the climax follows. If then the climax is put off too long it can be frustrating from a player's perspective. Anyway, looking forward to where the story goes and hoping for more spicy stuff! Good luck!

Joe Steve

so where is the download link for photo albums, just loops me around through there pages but i cant find a download link

dwrgames
>>138530375

Is always on the most recent post, Wallpaper and Photoshoot. But I'll send you on DM too! This post will always keep the recent posts highlighted. Also, all old albums are always shared along with the most recent one in the most recent post.

dandy

hi! ok i have a problem .i finish season 1 and i save files on season 2 but it`s not working.i need help pls .thx

dwrgames
>>160873100

Hi, if the save files aren't working, it could be a version incompatibility. You can try downloading the latest version of Season 1, load your save into it, and save again when prompted. But right at the beginning of Season 2, I offer an option to start from a questionnaire where you can simulate the choices from Season 1 that affect Season 2. This way, you can continue the content even without a valid save from Season 1 without any harm.

dandy
>>160873100

thx .all ok, my mistake didn`t read all....nice work anyway .bye

B,g,r

Hi I can download the game on iPhone iOS or no?

Pepe Lotas

At some points in the game I'm getting black screens showing dialogue and text like image 't3 (1)' not found. Is it possible to get those images?

dwrgames
>>170607472

You probably got a bugged version, with unofficial content accidentally included for testing. I released a version without this bug (0.25). If you download it again this won't happen.