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A free story featuring Totally Spies' Clover tooning it up into a big stallion.  It's inspired by a DA-Fuze art piece:
https://da-fuze.deviantart.com/art/Clover-Toon-Stallion-FtM-TG-663621889

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Karma P

A good sequence, although I think you could work on Clover's dialogue some, especially after the mental changes start piling up. It's a little weird imagining her using bigger words so much, and sentence structure could use some work as some lines come out as awkward to read/imagine someone speaking.