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Reading this comic again, I wonder if there needed to be so many transitions between the flashbacks and present day events. We had to show what this story was about and get the reader invested enough to vote for the pilot to be developed into a series, flashbacks seemed the most effective method to do so at the time. But putting several in the first chapter feels a little chaotic, now.

But I've always loved how cute Samantha looked waking up in the last panel ~

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"While my extensive experience as an editor has led me to a disdain for flashbacks and flash forwards and all such tricksy gimmicks I believe that if you, dear Reader, can extend your patience for just a moment, you will find that there is a Method to this tale of Madness." - Timothy Cavendish, Cloud Atlas, 2012