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Another page where I agonized over the dialogue, only to realize it's much stronger without any. Should I even use any inner monologues on the next page? New to this story arc? You can read it from the beginning here.

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Utzad

As good as it is with no dialogue, and regardless that that was the superior choice ... I need to know what was said! Ahhh I need knowledge lol. Perfect page. Love it

Jim

This is fantastic!

Carl Rossi

No words are necessary. I think it's better if the readers are able to interpret the unspoken dialogue in their own way. Those who have experienced more will see deeper and those who have not experienced it, will still feel empathy.