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Hi folks, so this one has been a bit of a slow burn to get completed as it did run into a few issues along the way. But Luriel and I worked through despite losing the voice cast midway through, and time zone differentials and what have ya, BUT as said, it's a little delayed, but here is DJShort S02E05 starring Beast Boy's naughty debut, the return of Bennett and a guest star role from Allard.

Because it was delayed by over a month, Luriel and I have spoke about it, and we're releasing it on our $10 tiers as an apology, and a thank you for your patience!

That means Tier 1, 2 and 3 can see this one, and if your on Luriel's Patreon, it'll be accessable across his Knight, Prince, King and Emperor tiers!

As always, it'll go freeview on the websites in a few months time, but for now, you three tiers can all enjoy!

Google drive link:https://drive.google.com/file/d/1se_Tgh0PeSgmtlh3OahHJKOeh6Tltg8w/view?usp=sharing

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Chris Blaue (Talisin)

nice to see beastboy animated and in action... very nice sex scene... however his voice seems a bit off... kinda a bit highpitched, chipmunk like ^^'

Derink Derink

The opening shot of titan tower was amazing and the camera pan inside was great. Loved all the easter eggs in BB room. The clock transitions were also incredibly well done. Using the camera is still as strong point. Now unfortunately, this is where I get super critical. Okay, on to the story…and it made me mad. Like what was that? There was nothing interesting about the story it felt like a giant advertisement for Medieval times. FIrst off, the whole watching the video was a no go for me. Self promotion turns me off so much. Like when people in the middle of a youtube video go “By the way go hit the subscribe button.” No save that for the end of the video outro. So having beast boy start by watching luriel's stuff was a giant eye roll and took me out of the scene. Then they just appeared I guess and left at the end. There was zero good story elements to it, it was just a giant sex scene. I skipped through it because I was bored out of my mind. And half the time it felt like beast boy was just third wheeling it up. It wasn’t till the halfway mark that beast boy really did anything. I watch it and I think, did luriel forget he was supposed to story plot this episode until the day before it was due? It felt like a giant slap in the face. I think the voice actors leaving was a blessing in disguise actually because the few lines I heard, I thought the voice acting was really really bad. On the topic of the voice, I really could do without beast boy saying things like, “Wow you’re so big. Or you;re so hung.” I was like please be quiet. You’re ruining the moment. You animations have always been good about keeping that “filler porn talk” out and just letting things play out more naturally. So if someone did say something, it felt natural. But I though there was too much of that filler talk and it felt forced. It’s fine to say things but it felt like you were over compensating with beast boy as I assumed you had things for the other two to say, but didn’t have the lines. Talk is fine, but some of the talk here felt like a forced insert. (Not against talk during the sex scenes, but I like it to feel natural and not just filler talk if that makes sense) If this was like 5 minutes I think it would have been fine, but 10 minutes of nothing happening was not a good choice. It was way too long for what it was. Just a bunch of sex poses that dragged on, and just when you thought it was done..nope switch poses and keep going. And also I found it incredibly disturbing. It felt kind of rapey at the start TBH like Bennett and Allard just teleport in and start kissing and sucking off beast boy…umm what? It was really unnerving to watch with zero set up. If beast boy woke up to the light and saw them and was like “Oh wow” then that’s a different story, but like having him sleep and everything starts was in poor taste. There was some weird animation stiffness in the middle like 4-7 When bennet sat on BB his arm was stiff or when Beast boy but his hands behind his head. The phone throwing I thought was really good. The beginning before 4 and after 7 I thought was well animated, just that 3 minutes in the middle was strangely weird. The ending felt like a cop out. Was it a dream or wasn’t it. If it was a dream then that just makes it dreadful by default. If it wasn’t then there should have been more story elements to make it clear. Why were the two boys in BB room then? WHat was the light? I need story elements to resolve things just just a giant sex scene with no answers. I can get mindless sex scenes any place I want. I come here for interesting story elements, and there wasn’t any in this animation. Have beast boy visit a LARP (Live action role play) thing or join a medieval reenactment because they need a lion tamer and he’s like “hehe I can be my own lion tamer” or something like that to combine the two universes. Maybe he finds a spell book that teleports Bennett and Allard in. Any story elements would have been great. Allard can stay in Medieval times. Not a fan of him. I was really disappointed in this animation. I wasn’t sure how BB voice would match up with the model. But I think it does quite nicely actually. So nice job there. The cumshots on beast boys face were well done, and the facial expressions were top notch as always. I enjoyed those. I really enjoyed the music in this one. Despite all the critical, Keep your head up DJ because they can’t all be winners, and I know the next one will be a home run. You’re still the best at what you do. Thanks for all the hard work. :)

Piers Nivans

That was really good! The camera work, the lighting, the music... And especially the way they surprised him, such a pleasant awakening. You can totally tell they enjoyed it.

Harry Armsby Doomlight

I love allards sneaky load bury into beast boy lol I’m surprised he was able to resist changing form to punish him hehe

Wesker Burkin

Great fun piece, both you and Luriel should be proud of what you put out.

Kenshi Takahashi

Huge thanks to you for sharing this with us lower tiers. Fun to watch and enjoy, now want to know about Luriel's characters and world.