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Chris and Piers have booked some time at the local gym to practice some defence drills and counter attacks. Unfortunately, an accident on the road has caused huge delays, and Chris is stuck in traffic. As Piers waits patiently, their booking slot overruns and Jason arrives.

Jason and Dick have the same idea as Chris and Piers, and to practice melee blocking as well as some playful rivalry, but it looks as though Dick is stuck in traffic too.

Piers goes to leave, but Jason points out that both their partners are stuck, and they're both there. To that end, Jason suggests they practice combat and counters. Piers isn't overly friendly with Jason, as he finds him obnoxious and hot headed. But after some persuasion, he agrees to combat with Jason.

Jason starts by complimenting Piers' build, and then challenges him to take him down! Piers tackles his core with the intention of knocking Jason off balance, take his legs out and then pin him down!

Jason with a seemingly sixth sense reads Piers like a book and prepares himself! With his stance fixed, Piers is unable to knock him over, and Jason counters by practically lifting Piers off the ground! The pair struggle and very quickly both crash to the ground with a hard thud.

But they're top and tail and as Jason falls onto Piers, his face gets a face full of bulge... and it's a nice big one too! With Jason now pinning his competitor to the ground, he challenges him once again... but this time it isn't who can bring who down first.... it's who can endure the longest!

Soon the pair are locked in a 69! Jason enjoys devouring Piers' nectar as the BSAA hunk is left no option but to do the same as Jason succumbs to Piers' soft lips...

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Derink Derink

This was the one I was looking forward to the most, but It also disappointed the most. I love the set up with the unusual pair. The costumes are great. I love the wrestling bit at the start. The lore of them waiting for their parnters and then making the most of their time was super cool. Much more interesting than doing a simple. "Red hood rescues piers" or something. I love how you got them into position that was very cool, but then the 69 was very lack luster. I love the side ways 69 that's a very cool and sexy pose. But the angles weren't good. It had the same issues as Trent and Peter. Tight angles don't work on 69's. The reason why Andrew and Joe worked well was the two 69 images were wider shots and then The characters were spaced so you could see through to joe while also seeing andrew. You need to set the camera above them looking down, or had a down low wide angle shot wear you see piers in the foreground but then it's angled in such a way that you can see jason in the back ground. The tight angles where they are so closely pressed against each other doesn't work because then it just looks like a blob of color and you can't tell what is going on. Looks like you tried to replicate the Luke montage in the last image but it doesn't work in this case because The legs in the two shots bleed into each opther and it looks strange. You should have had a little jump between images 6 and 7 where they take off their clothes, and then isntead of having jason being over piers, they were in the side by side pose for the last 3, and then paired that with wide angles that frame it so you can see both characters faces. SO they have to have their bodies a bit a part so the camera can see both. One of my favorite 69 poses, but disappointed because you can't really see anything. So it's very anti climaxctic. Then on top of that Jason got the short end of the stick. The last time we really saw him was in that stray pack over a year ago, and here once the action started, there was more of a focus on piers. Image 6 he shared with piers, then 7 and 8 were focused on piers and then 9 he shared with piers. So there was never a moment for him. That and we didn't get to see his muscles at all cuz they both kept their shirts on was disappointing. Loved the story and the wrestling bit at the start, but the ending was a let down. Was hoping the framing on the 69 would be better this time, but close ups really don't work as it completely blocks out the other character and then you either have to ignore the other character or spend way too many images bouncing back and forth between the two in close ups, that is it derails the pack completely. And if you do the montage thing (which I like) you cant have piers' legs bleed into jason's legs because it just makes the middle of the image look strange.

Dante Jackal

Noted, yeah I'm not happy with the last pic. Still learning to montage, the problem is they're in the same position so it blanked really weird lol