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Monster Island Cover and Chapters 16-27 Draft 2 (Patreon)

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2021-09-16 03:54:27
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2026-06
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Just got in the cover! Still chugging along with edits, heres where I'm up to now. I'm taking Friday off in the hopes I'll finish. We'll see. 



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Anonymous

Thanks for the next set of chapters to edit. Cover looks great!

Kat

Cover is AWESOME

Anonymous

Just want to say I really appreciate the fact that I get to see the book being written and then see as things changed based on feedback that was given on each chapter and that it will change again before the final book. Thanks for letting us help make awesome books!

Daniel

Cover looks great! I think the wings should be bigger. A bird that massive is going to need massive wings! Just right off the cover

Aran Kieskamp

i dont know why, but those wings look like seagull wings to me, might be the leaf on the left. and i agree with daniel that those wings are undersized for the size of the creature

Anonymous

I really like that Aiden wasn't the best at expanding his core. I think the new version is alot better.

Micke Andersson
>>68051546

Why? The base story is that he's special, and now you like that he's Average Joe. I read fantasy to get into the story of people that aren't Average Joe. Had I wanted to read that, I could have stayed with my diary .. had I ever written one. YMMV, of course.

Eeekkkk

He did met his master's target of 16 times his base Vaya just did 17her base but we don't know their starting number. Also he has every meridian open so that does into account of his overall ability on top of all the high level runes he's has it is kind of crazy. @chris did he every apply all his high level runes? I just reread it all to make sure about the edits and it is a little unclear. I he got lightning, what about fire and air?